|Reviews for Clean Break|
| Thorn chapter 1 . 7/6
| Dan Ingram chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
As a short story, I rather liked this. Structurally, it's sound, good flow and nice look inside Faith's head. Personally I always thought the sympathetic part of Faith, her abusive background, growing up in poverty, was overlooked in favor of her impulsive/violent side. Nice to see a fic that plays it up.
For a starter fic, it was pretty damn good. Hope to see more.
| ANARCHY RULES chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This was quite good. You really got into her head and let us see her thoughts. If you want some constructive criticism however, a one shot story like this should probably be a little longer. Aside from that I really enjoyed it and I hope you ontinue with other stories.