I really wish there were more to this! I just know you would do a fantastic job with all the different members' dreams. I would love to see how the style of dreams varies from Hobbits to Men to Dwarves to Elves. Alas.

This is absolutely riveting ! Gosh I could feel the apprehension & anxiety as they were walking through the stone halls , especially when Gandalf & Pippin had to dispel with their lights ! My heart was raving in time with Pippin’s no doubt for I felt edgy & nervous at what they may discover , although I knew it would be the rest of fellowship. It felt as if I was right there with them experiencing it !

I truly adore your dynamics you have between each of the members of the fellowship. In this particular chapter that between Gandalf & Pippin is very sweet ! All their voices as well as individual characters are captured beautifully in your writing ! Too with scenery & emotion ! All round such beautiful writing ! I know it had been some years , but I beseech you to continue even should this take years to complete for this concept is phenomenal & your writing of it is amazing , it will certainly be a story to remember & to return to reread ! I have no doubt of it ! Amazing work !

Amazing story! Please continue!

did you ever write more of this? i would like to read it

great story! I hope you continue it!

I love the portrayal of Boromir thank you!

I am so happy you decided to write a sequel!

Hello Indigo Bunting! (what a beautiful bird)

I just read this story, not sure how I missed it earlier. I really enjoyed what you've written so far. Have you finished this at another location? I'd love to read the rest. You've set up quite the intriguing tale!

FINNNNNIIIIIISSSHHH! :D Please do finish this story, even if it takes a while, because this is an enthralling concept! I guessed what the crystal was the moment Gandalf said he didn't understand how one could be broken, and from there on out I continued reading, but simultaneously thinking, "Blast it all, only this chapter left!" ':) Anyway, great story so far - and great characterization. I love how you write so well. I have never gotten up the courage to attempt a Tolkien fan fiction . . . And I'd mostly been disappointed by any I read, but this one is excellent! Thanks! And maybe I could possibly threaten you with an invasion of Nazgul if you don't complete this? They are, after all, still alive at this point in time in your story. . . :D

I do hope you continue this! You have the characterizations down perfectly and the plot is very unique!

what a shame this story was never finished...

I someone should continue this story if the author isn't going too... I really like it so far.

This fanfiction is incredibly interesting! I know that you said that the updates would be slow, but still, it's been a while. Are you still going to continue this? I'd love to see everyone's dreams, and I'm especially intrigued to see how you'd portray Elvish sleep. After all, it's quite different from mortal sleep since the dreamer walks in his memories rather than... well, a dream. Pippin could walk in Legolas' memories. Isn't that something? :D And since it's supposed to be a nightmare, the elf would probably be reliving some gruesome batte. I'm sure he has seen many in his days! Anyway, I really hope that this fanfiction will still get updated. I'll stick around in case it does.

If ever you want to update, ill read it!

Wonderful story! I hope you continue it some day. Love how you write for Gimli. Thank you!