Very good story. Enjoyed a lot

I enjoyed your story very much. Thanks for sharing your time and imagination with us :)

Brilliant just brilliant I loved every minute of it!

tututut Jess is no Prize! :P :P

lovely ending. I roared with laughter at the Fisher-scene :D

and I really laughted out loud at the word "subterfuge" didn't know that one yet :D

great story! :D

awesome! Jess in action :D and the good night kiss was so sweet :D

:D :D :D hahahaha yeah, six children, they started really early. And oh, I loved the line "He nearly forgot WHO he was" :D

OMG I so loved Becker's lie, it was soooo cute :D

Yeah! You go girl! show him who is boss :D :D :D

and come on Becker! that girl can defuse a bomb after all!

:D :D :D :D oh I so so so so like that story already :D

very interesting O.O

of course it was! -.-

I'm curious about what call that was (yeah, actually I should be in bed already, but - meh - who cares) :D

I actually found it very clever for Jess to hide the actual data, after all this is a could-be-scenario as well. :) off to read the next chapter :D

Jess was really awesome in this story. I liked how Becker lied to Fisher about Jess seeing someone so he wouldn't ask her out. The epilogue was really funny.

I love it x

Ahhhh yes! yes! yes!

*waves and smiles happily*

What an awesome story! Loved every word of it! Loved the epilogue making such good use of Becker's subterfuge!

Sorry it took me so long to read and review!

It's such a pleasure reading your stories! I do hope there will be more in the future.

Hugs!