|Reviews for quiet hands and rainwater lips|
| BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 9/14
This is beautiful. Great work with everything!
| DeepPoeticGirl chapter 1 . 5/5
Very beautiful! My favorite part is really the beginning, describing each love. Very nicely worded, felt incredibly poetic.
| xerrex chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
This was amazing and so well written-I love your style! And I loved how you kept the...mood? consistent throughout the entire story, right down to the end. Amazing, amazing; this fandom deserves more of your writing (especially this pairing!) !
| CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
so, so, so terribly in love with this story. every word is a brushstroke on a painting, beautifully, vividly done. my favorite lines:
"The second time is more sublte-less like an ocean and more like rain."
"-and then Mamura's hands, his ever-quiet hands, trailing down the loose bends of her hair." - good lord, it's the height of romance and sensuality and i think my heart fluttered madly when i read that.
thank you very muchg for writing this. :)
| rumea chapter 1 . 12/1/2014
this is so lovely! I think you captured her feelings towards the two very well. everyone just seems so in-character and ADORABLE. amazing stuff. c:
| Mamura Daiki chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
This is simple, yet so beautiful and unique. I'm in love (with the story xD).
| pfeffersteak chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
This is simply the feelings of Suzume and bittersweet. Sobs.
| UnderneathXtheXunderneath chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
this is so sweet and really really well written.
| Peque Saltamontes chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/9/2014
Stunning work, as usual
| Yumi Ayumu chapter 1 . 5/20/2014
I really wish that this kind of scene can happen in the manga. Oh how I ship these two TT_TT
| El Duckie chapter 1 . 4/29/2014
I marathoned through HnR a few weeks ago and totally ship Suzume and Mamura. I love your fics, they're wonderful and so sweet. Hope you write more (especially in case chapter 66 turns the story back to Suzume and Shishio entirely...)
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/14/2014
I love your mazume fics so much
| thefearlesscherryblossom chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
That was really lovely, you captured the subtle bittersweet shift from the ended first love to the second love well. I liked the way Mamura, Shishio, and Suzume were characterized in here. Excited to see how things turn out for Suzume and Mamura in the manga! Thanks for sharing!
| silver snowdrop 363 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Aw, this was a really nice story :) Personally, I am not a fan of Mazume, but your story was very cute. Your style of writing fits this manga very well. :)