|Reviews for A Thorn in the Side|
| ElricKeyblade chapter 14 . 2/28
As usual your update is wonderful! Much love for the Barry-Wally bonding, more chances of Wally-Perdita bonding, and the real issues brought up surrounding Wally's identity being released to the public and his interaction with normal civilians is utterly fantastic! Most of all, I am really happy to see how you showed Wally's true character here- that no matter what, he will always be concerned about others. Wonderful job! :)
Can't wait to see what happens at his 'tea party' with Perdita, and how the rest of the team will treat him now!
| Number1Weirdo chapter 14 . 2/28
This is such an awesome fic! I love your idea, its so new and interesting and yet still sticks to the young justice plot. I fully enjoy reading this, can't wait to read more!
| Nyx811 chapter 14 . 2/28
yay wally and barry bonding time love it :)
| fan girl 666 chapter 14 . 2/25
love the Barry and Wally bonding in this chapter and that Iris wouldn't take no for and answer when it came to him moving in
| littlebirdxoxx chapter 14 . 2/25
Yay new chapter ! Please update soon
| Linwe Tulcakelume chapter 14 . 2/25
| patrick the almighty observer chapter 14 . 2/25
well this was a nice story, wonder if vertigo is going to try anything at the party. well regardless this does give off the feel of hope and I like that, I also like that Wally is still sticking to his principals even though he has reformed. Hope that we get some interactions between the young queen and Thorn in the future because that could be cute. all in all this was a good chapter, it had good pacing and was interesting, a little sad that his taking the heart to the young queen got cut but as long as she gets screen time later on in the story its nothing to bad. I also like the fact that you didn't hand wave away the very real dangers that would follow if thorn ended up living with his aunt thanks to the fact that he doesn't have a secret identity. in closing I cant wait for the next chapter.
| nightmaster000 chapter 14 . 2/25
Another good chapter.
| MiscellaneousSoup chapter 14 . 2/25
I wish that I could write as excellently as you.
| Nyx811 chapter 13 . 2/8
| Guest chapter 13 . 2/5
Ohh, new update! It's really nice. I love how Perdita looks like she will be looking up to Wally- so cute!
| ElricKeyblade chapter 13 . 2/5
I absolutely loved this chapter! Especially because lately I had been hankering for some Wally/Perdita brotp fic or something of the sort, and this chapter just happened to deliver in the sweetest way possible! :D
I also want to thank you yet again for your continuous work on this story. Each and every time I see the update land in my email box, I am filled with joy and anticipation at else is in store for Thorn (Wally) and his adventures. This story is completely fantastic, and I thank you so much for writing it!
| fan girl 666 chapter 13 . 2/5
love the bond between Perdita and Wally so far I just hope she believes him about Vertigo
| nightmaster000 chapter 13 . 2/5
| TeahTheFoxLover chapter 13 . 2/5
Nice plot twist. The story about the Leshy really made me smile, and the crush Queen Perdita is developing, aww! xD I hope that crush and the Leshy reference will help Wally convince her Vertigo is not to be trusted. If nothing else, the League has video evidence of the Injustice League making their case, in which Vertigo practically prances around talking about how they'll take over the world. Would help if Sphere could store video too, especially as she'd been there in the... whetever jungle the IL was hiding in.