Reviews for Flight of the Phoenix
Just a Crazy-Man chapter 4 . 10/7/2014
Love it!
A Killzone fan chapter 4 . 3/13/2014
Awesome! Loyal Saric to the Visari family! Remembering fallen Helghast hero's! Great stuff!
The Night Hunter chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
Good job I like that chapter can't wait to see how she fare in army, update soon
MEleeSmasher chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
This is really good, in terms of how Maya wants independence and her strength.

Also, I hope you can change the ending of Shadow Fall later on.
dpx6101 chapter 4 . 3/11/2014
Thank God you are still writing this. I wonder if Hera actually does love her daughter. An idea: Since she was disowned, Maya is no longer a Visari. She should make that clear to Hera (ie. No emotion in her voice while having conversations with the Chancellor both public and private). Hera would have to earn her daughter's love back. If I had a mother that caged me for half of my life and then disown me when I make a commitment, I would no longer have a mother because that woman is a monster.
The Night Hunter chapter 3 . 1/26/2014
Well that was really nice I hope to see more chapters very soon, don't you dare to abandon this story. Oh and I can't wait for her to meet Lucas
The Night Hunter chapter 2 . 1/26/2014
Aww poor Maya, no rest even for the youngest
The Night Hunter chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
Interesting start, nice to see more insight in Maya's character
Guest chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
Very well written story. Keep it up.
Random Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
{ I'm liking it so far. Gimmie MOAR! }
Onsholo chapter 3 . 12/21/2013
We do not know how advanced is cybernetics in killzone so that is quite a risky move on your part.
MEleeSmasher chapter 3 . 12/20/2013
I like this.
Gear-2557 chapter 2 . 12/20/2013
I'm kinda surprised that you made Harkin a bad guy in this story.
Onsholo chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
I enjoy this,require more,also child Echo is extremelly cute :P
Guest chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
More... PLEASE! :D
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