Reviews for Dinner
Madame Mermaid chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
Good Afternoon,

just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this one-shot. Portraying the different team members through their attitude to cooking was a very enlightening, not to mention fun, idea, and I think you managed to characterise them all very well - though in light of how season 1 developed, I'm both wondering whether there's anything Ward does not know how to do, and whether the enjoyment he seems to take in cooking in this one-shot is also an act, i.e. a part of the persona Grant Ward he's created, or a characteristic of his real personality. With Ward, I'm never quite sure who he really is and who he pretends to be (and honestly, I wonder if he can still tell the two apart himself), which is what makes him a rather complex character to deal with. My favourite passage in this was your portrayal of May, though, because you managed to show that she has warring sides to her - the disciplined, cool agent who's control even extends to cooking, and the soft spot she has inside her that enjoys the calm of baking (something I actually understand really well) and craves both chocolate as a comfort food and the company of others to alleviate her loneliness. Your description managed to find a metaphor for both sides, which is nice. :-)

And overall, I'm once more left with a smile at how cooking and eating seems to bring people together - it's a natural human response, but fun to see nonetheless.

I really hope you'll give us many more thoughtful one-shots like this one - so far, I greatly enjoy reading your stories in this fandom.
All the best,

Madame Mermaid
Kat A. Coop chapter 1 . 4/7/2015
I loved this. Truly amazing:)
purpleMurex chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Very nice and peaceful :D
(I didn't notice any out of place tense changes)
PercabethSkyewardClace13ore chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
It's like,

"May, who is flying the plane?" Skye asked, as the woman walked into the common area.

"Nobody, why?"

"What?! WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE! DO SOMETHING, SOMEONE, BECAUSE I DON'T KNOW HOW TO FLY A FREAKING PLANE! AH, WE'RE ALL GOING TO DIE! Man, I had plans for my life. Well, nice seeing you. We're all going to die, and the T-100 here is just reading more pages than I have read in my entire life. DO ANY OF YOU GRASP THE CONCEPT THAT WE'RE GOING TO LOSE ALTITUDE? HAS EVERYONE LOST THEIR BRAINS? OH MY-"
"Skye," Ward interrupted. "This plane is a high-tech S.H.I.E.L.D plane. Do you really think they wouldn't put the best tech in it? Plus, I've heard that Fitz had a hand in the programming, and the plane is flying itself."

"It's true," Fitz pipes up, "I can show you from the tablet if you want."

He brings up the specs of an amazing code, and Skye admits it's super-cool, and calms down after apologizing to everyone, snuggling back into Ward with earbuds in once more.
Spitfire303 chapter 1 . 10/22/2014
this is amazing
kaaterina petrova chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Aww, this was adorable!

Princess of Imagination chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
Oh wow! I so loved this fic! It is really sweet and well written! Nice plot!
BowStringPrincess chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
That was sweet! great job!
Roxanne Beaumont chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
This was really cool! I loved how you delved into each of the characters' thoughts and feelings. Nicely done!
AWall chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
I like this character study through food. chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Good job!
I really liked it :)
I think you described their personalities pretty well and as a big fan of SkyeWard I must say it was cute - all this bonding time with cooking and just spending time together :)
Icy Storm Shadow chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Clara is better, she is amazing!
I really enjoyed this story.
Icy Storm Shadow chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
I'm with Ward and Simmons, Matt Smith till the end and after!
I loved this one, funny and sweet.
Good job!
nathy.faithy chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
It was amusing, I like it! Surely enjoyed the way you used their personalities into their cooking, I love cooking too, I'm mostly like Coulson, but if I try enough I'm a bit like Ward, I prefer cooking with music, but somethings I enjoy the silence of just cutting up some vegetables and stuff. Nice view! ;)
seibelle chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
More pls. Thanks for sharing.. It was amazing.!
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