|Reviews for Under Marching Orders from My Heart|
| Mira chapter 12 . 4/14
Was shocked and appalled to find that this chapter is the last and there is no concrete END to the story, how dare you leave me on a cliffhanger! Nevertheless, I fully enjoyed what there was of this story and I really hope there will be more. I am thoroughly LOVING John being the one in control of a situation, one-upping Mycroft, Sherlock, and Moriarty. Ash is also an amazing OC, you really write a "steady presence" very well.
If you're still tallying votes or if you ever decide to come back to this, I would prefer Sherlock is there for the reveal just to "see" the look on his face.
| soel15 chapter 12 . 7/21/2015
Hello, first of all I would like to say that I love this story and I would like that will update soon, I love what you did with John, is my favorite character, I look ances the johnlock reunion, the suspense is killing me, so please please and please update soon.
pd. English is not my first language.
| Kitkatthevampirelover chapter 12 . 6/11/2015
I just read this and I was like wow this is amazing!I love how its written the character are spot on evil cliff hangar I can't wait to read more. Update soon.
| Jupiter Moriarty chapter 12 . 5/27/2015
Awesome story! I say Sherlock should be present; it'll be interesting to see how he would react and how he could miss John being an SRR solider. Hope you will update this story.
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/2/2015
Sherlock should so be present for the big reveal
| ShadowStalker chapter 12 . 2/26/2015
That was awesome! Please update when you can! Oh, Sherlock should be present, I want to see how he reacts to BAMF John 3
| Mari Wollsch chapter 12 . 1/20/2015
great story, when will you continua? xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| Kikiliki chapter 12 . 1/6/2015
Please Update this Story
This is really Good :)
| ZellaCat chapter 12 . 12/8/2014
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! I find myself obsessed with this story, its great, so addicting, its 530am here and i have work tomorrow, thats how addicting it is. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
By the way, i think i missed it, what does T.C. stand for? i think its total control but im not sure...
| librarycat9 chapter 11 . 11/22/2014
This is such a great story. Thanks for writing.
| librarycat9 chapter 12 . 11/22/2014
What an evil cliffie!
| power0girl chapter 12 . 8/6/2014
Wow! I just found this story (not sure how now) yesterday and promptly chewed through it ALL. I am loving this, so twisty and convelouted, I absolutely love it!
And Sherlock NEEDS to be there when John deals w Moriarty.
| Acadiea chapter 12 . 7/13/2014
That was a mean tease but also very engaging I can't wait to read more keep up the great work. Hope you update soon.
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/4/2014
Sherlock should be present for the big reveal!
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/22/2014
Love this story. :)