Poor Barza. It just made an enemy out of THE most dangerous AI in all of Halo...bar none.
He is in for a UNIVERSE full of pain!

I enjoyed this chapter.

Well, I demolished 27 chapters in 2-3 days. And now, I shall review.

Let's start by saying that your style has improved grealty since your first chapters. Not that they had any glaring fault to them, mind you -although you could use some proofreading-, but now they're very, very good.

I ADORE the Quiet Repose and its crew. Every last one of them -sans Jack, but I'm not sure if I should consider her crew just yet- is a marvelous cinnamon roll that deserves all the love and praise I can give them.

The events surrounding the twin Sarah's keep making me wonder if there is a John on the ME galaxy, and what might he be up to. Well, the same could be said of the rest of the SPARTAN II. I do wonder if we will get to see Blue Team getting dragged along for the adventure. If the galaxy is impressed by a team of IVs and bewildered by a lone II, what would they say at having the most lethal team of both galaxies reunited?

That makes me wonder as well if other events regarding slipspace accidents might have dragged more Haloversian peoples into the Mass Effect galaxy. Jorge and half a supercarrier, for example.

I did get a bit disconcerted by your swift dismissal of UNSC weaponry in the first chapters. The MA5 fires at a rate of 900 rounds per minute with a muzzle velocity of almost a kilometer per second, with bullets of some 25g of weight. One could argue that the kinetic barriers of the Mass Effect universe are designed to withstand almost luminical speeds of fire, but then again it would be a round the size of a grain of rice, with almost no mass. An armor piercing titanium round the size of a middle finger shot at one kilometer per hour accompanied by 899 more in a minute should be enough to deplete most of of a kinetic barrier

All the "repose" is missing is a precher and a...well let's just say a physical worker 'wink wink nudge nudge' ;)

This review is for chapter 27. I apparently already put in a review for a previous chapter 27 you had up.
I am glad to see you continue work on this story and I am excited to see what you have in store. Keep up the good work.
This chapter was busy bouncing between the three main story lines, but I feel you made the right choice. There reader needed to be reminded of everything that is currently going on within the story.

I should have waited for the next chapter. This wait is gonna kill me.

One of the best Halo/ME crossovers currently. I like your characters. Nice to see it updated.

Welcome back ;)

Fairly certain the Watcher is Legion. Gxxxxxm cliffhangers, but dxxx me if you didn't leave me cravin for more.

Oh i can't wait to see how Cortana would fair in the mainframe

Good job keep it up

You would think UNSC bullets would do a lot more damage to mass effect kinetic shielding because all UNSC bullets are FMJ and are designed to break covenant energy shields. But that’s just me

Uh isn’t all theses Geth friendly on the planet? Mostly referring to the last sentence since after all everyone else doesn’t realize yet that the hostile geth they have encountered are “heretics” and go against the main Geth host. Unless of course this watcher is on a different planet because the Home world is supposed to be all of the good Geth as they are preserving it for their creators when they come back.

Well anyways good chapter however you absolutely Must have Lasky and Roland find out about the Chief being in this galaxy after all there should be news about him on the web and other stuff since any articles involving him might be asking if he’s human or saying something about Humanity, as such Roland should find out about him after processing the billions of search results about humanity in this galaxy.

Great chapter! Glade to see you back with another one. Can't wait for more! Keep up the wonderful work!

Please be okay Cortana... please oh please... there is no Master Chief without Cortana.