|Reviews for Mon Petit Gâteau|
| DarkLady19 chapter 2 . 1/22
Loved it! I thought the entire thing was just really adorable, and I think you got across Harry and Draco's characters really well.
| trollnexus chapter 2 . 1/18
Perfect. Absolutely exquisite. The pacing, the dialogue, the detail...and, best of all, the way you portrayed Draco's insecurity about his body. Body image is really a delicate topic, and I know from experience how hard it is to navigate through a lover's misgivings, on either end. I think in the end the best one can do is to just honestly show the other person one's love, and Harry did that well here. I wish I could see more of how this relationship will unfold, but I suppose my imagination will have to do :P Thank you for writing this.
| Ava-Potter gal chapter 2 . 1/8
This story makes me happy. :-D
| felixXcalhoun chapter 2 . 1/8
Omg this story was so cute I usually don't like fluff but this had me squealing in delight and thinking of danishes the entire time. I think my family thought I was crazy going awww every two minutes. Fantastic job
| Bilnur chapter 1 . 1/7
"Le Étienne de Pâtisserie" i'm sorry i kinda laughed... I'm French and I have to correct you. It's "La pâtisserie d'Étienne" ahah please don't use google translate. They don't know a thing.
| ellemisha11 chapter 2 . 12/12/2013
this is so sweet and realistic. you did a great job. thank you.
| sarah-jane chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
wow...just wow. i saw chubby!draco and was determined not to like fanfic. i ended up loving it a lot...
thank you...it was splendid.
| FantasyFiend09 chapter 2 . 12/10/2013
I popped over from LJ to check this out and am glad I did! I love that Harry is still inarticulate but has learned to demand the time he needs to get his point across. I also loved how Draco's unhappiness in eating doughnuts really bothered the baker in Harry. You really conveyed why Harry had chosen his career and why it would hurt him to see baked goods cause misery. You also really captured the ways that more than just Draco's weight had changed since Hogwarts. You used his different figures as a way to symbolise his different personas, and I'm not surprised Harry prefers the softer one.
| Chevonne Knowles chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
Nice read! It was a good story
| mariexx chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
omgomg! why does this not have more reviews? this was amazing! it was unbelievably well written and just so real! i loved everything about it! i was wary about the chubby draco warning but gave it a shot anyway and i'm so glad i did because you wrote it SO well and it just made so much sense! the sex was really hot and the budding romance between harry and draco was so heartfelt! also, harry and draco were characterized wonderfully! i'm in so much awe over how real this felt!
please write a sequel or outtake or something!
| inkImpressions chapter 2 . 12/9/2013
I enjoyed it greatly. I loved how human the characters seemed, not everyone can do that. I really liked Draco in this fic because of how he was portrayed. Happy writing!
| sevvyboy1fangirl chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
You should write more cuz I LUV reading this
| Drarry4eva chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
What a cute story.
| PandasWearGlasses chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
Absolutely adorable. A true gem. It's great to see a fic where the characters aren't chiseled like gods or some other unrealistic nonsense.
| Luc chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
I loved this Harry and Draco. Maybe Draco being a bit pudgy actually made this seem more real. It certaily didn't take anything away from this :) Loved it.