Reviews for The Fleeting Moment
PAT2024 chapter 23 . 4/10
Wow, I have now read all your stories and I really enjoyed them all, but this one is really one of your best.

Quite different in some ways. I was devasted by the annihilation of some of our preferred characters, and by Edward's despair... but the twist you brought at the end was very well done. Thanks a lot for sharing. You are truly talented, I hope you will continue writing and share your work with us.

All the best
breakingdawn57 chapter 23 . 12/21/2016
Beautifully written!
Knit Bug chapter 23 . 12/12/2016
I loved this story. Very unique and such a great read. The research... the pacing, all of it- it's a fabulous read. Thank you so much for sharing your words. I loved every line of every paragraph.

Knit
Sassyvampmama chapter 23 . 10/10/2016
I loved this. Thanks for sharing.
BlueDiamondRing chapter 23 . 10/3/2016
This was different and wonderful. Enjoy your writing so much.
BlueDiamondRing chapter 14 . 10/3/2016
Her kissing his cheek and branding him was sweet and apparently so worth it to Edward.
BlueDiamondRing chapter 7 . 10/2/2016
This fascinating
BlueDiamondRing chapter 2 . 10/2/2016
Sign in and counted now. Looking forward to how this unfolds.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2016
Interesting, looking forward to this.
Lanigra25 chapter 23 . 9/6/2016
Loved reading this so much!
Comrade'sRoza chapter 23 . 6/29/2016
Loved it!
jk chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
you lost my interest in the very first chapter!
Edward refers to himself as "precious" wtf?
then you have him be a used up whore...
then that weird shit about death talking to him?
no thanks
fatpotatoe chapter 20 . 5/14/2016
Was that a lemon ? It happened so fast ... yeah, but so good.
fatpotatoe chapter 16 . 5/13/2016
It is interesting, the concept that death has to be earned.
fatpotatoe chapter 14 . 5/13/2016
o my heart, my heart.
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