|Reviews for The Fleeting Moment|
| Lanigra25 chapter 23 . 9/6
Loved reading this so much!
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 23 . 6/29
| jk chapter 1 . 6/21
you lost my interest in the very first chapter!
Edward refers to himself as "precious" wtf?
then you have him be a used up whore...
then that weird shit about death talking to him?
| fatpotatoe chapter 20 . 5/14
Was that a lemon ? It happened so fast ... yeah, but so good.
| fatpotatoe chapter 16 . 5/13
It is interesting, the concept that death has to be earned.
| fatpotatoe chapter 14 . 5/13
o my heart, my heart.
| fatpotatoe chapter 8 . 5/13
Nice introduction of Demetri into the story.
| fatpotatoe chapter 4 . 5/13
Rick's character made me of Joe Jett who made big news in the securities industry in 1994.
| fatpotatoe chapter 2 . 5/13
| fatpotatoe chapter 1 . 5/13
| jk chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
you lost me in the first half of chapter one! Edwards a whore? NO THANKS
| my own hell chapter 23 . 8/22/2015
you wrote a beautiful story i love it thank you so much i really love
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
I have read this story many times and I have enjoyed ur other stories as well. I just came to see your profile if their are any new updates and really sad to hear about your husband...no words can heal the pain and there is nothing that I can say that would make it better. I am so sorry for your loss and I hope the moments you two have cherished together provide strength and love to move forward..
| readicted chapter 23 . 6/29/2015
The Cedar House was a wonderful concept to honor the Cullens, who I still mourn. Silly, I know but good stories make you feel, and I felt their loss, oddly enough, I felt it most keenly as they were being so well memorialized. I was a beautiful tribute to name their children after them. I especially love the name Esme Rose, so pretty. Edward stepping into Carlisle's shoes so to speak, becoming a doctor was also a wonderful touch. I think it's befitting his character because he is able to continue helping others. His compassion and perceptiveness put to meaningful use, no longer a parasite. Edward will not be pleased at all about his son, but perhaps Emmett is changed in order to save his life. Very unique ending Camilla. I have enjoyed this fic and its clear how much effort you put into research. You are very dedicated. Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories and for replying so conscientiously.
| readicted chapter 22 . 6/29/2015
That ought to share Aro up a bit.