Reviews for The Fleeting Moment
Lanigra25 chapter 23 . 9/6
Loved reading this so much!
Comrade'sRoza chapter 23 . 6/29
Loved it!
jk chapter 1 . 6/21
you lost my interest in the very first chapter!
Edward refers to himself as "precious" wtf?
then you have him be a used up whore...
then that weird shit about death talking to him?
no thanks
fatpotatoe chapter 20 . 5/14
Was that a lemon ? It happened so fast ... yeah, but so good.
fatpotatoe chapter 16 . 5/13
It is interesting, the concept that death has to be earned.
fatpotatoe chapter 14 . 5/13
o my heart, my heart.
fatpotatoe chapter 8 . 5/13
Nice introduction of Demetri into the story.
fatpotatoe chapter 4 . 5/13
Rick's character made me of Joe Jett who made big news in the securities industry in 1994.
fatpotatoe chapter 2 . 5/13
Very intriguing.
fatpotatoe chapter 1 . 5/13
great start.
jk chapter 1 . 12/10/2015
you lost me in the first half of chapter one! Edwards a whore? NO THANKS
my own hell chapter 23 . 8/22/2015
you wrote a beautiful story i love it thank you so much i really love
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
I have read this story many times and I have enjoyed ur other stories as well. I just came to see your profile if their are any new updates and really sad to hear about your husband...no words can heal the pain and there is nothing that I can say that would make it better. I am so sorry for your loss and I hope the moments you two have cherished together provide strength and love to move forward..
big hug
readicted chapter 23 . 6/29/2015
The Cedar House was a wonderful concept to honor the Cullens, who I still mourn. Silly, I know but good stories make you feel, and I felt their loss, oddly enough, I felt it most keenly as they were being so well memorialized. I was a beautiful tribute to name their children after them. I especially love the name Esme Rose, so pretty. Edward stepping into Carlisle's shoes so to speak, becoming a doctor was also a wonderful touch. I think it's befitting his character because he is able to continue helping others. His compassion and perceptiveness put to meaningful use, no longer a parasite. Edward will not be pleased at all about his son, but perhaps Emmett is changed in order to save his life. Very unique ending Camilla. I have enjoyed this fic and its clear how much effort you put into research. You are very dedicated. Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories and for replying so conscientiously.
readicted chapter 22 . 6/29/2015
That ought to share Aro up a bit.
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