Reviews for Mixing Business With Pleasure
Vamps09 chapter 1 . 3/1
Thi is a good one too. Thanks for writing.
Mrs. O'Shea chapter 1 . 2/21
I loved this! Thank you for sharing.
LyssaF chapter 1 . 2/15
very nice
Edward's Life chapter 1 . 2/15
Love it! Thank you for sharing both the true part AND the fantasy part. Mixing it to be great one-shot! Unless you are going to give us more of your Edward & Bella. I sure as hell wouldn't mind reading so much more about them.

Again, thank you for sharing!

I am,
Edward's Life
Peelmeagrapenyc chapter 1 . 2/14
Well I liked it!
Evil.Inc chapter 1 . 1/13
I enjoyed this story very much. I liked how light-hearted if felt, very care-free.
alliz chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
I can't believe they didn't like it! I'm on reading everything you've written kick right now! I loved CheekyWard and Love Grad Night too! Also Fourth Floor is one of my most favorite o/s ever! You're amazing as is your writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Love it. Thanks for writing this story.
kelley turner chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
White more pleas and thank u
paragod chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
I love your Dior Rob.
Thanks,
V
CluelessMeg chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Love this one! Such a sweet and sexy as hell Edward! Those are my fav Edwards, the ones that are Bella and now right away she's who he wants and stops at nothing to get his woman.
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 9/28/2014
The beginning was a little too detailed. Not your normal flow in this one. Loved the end of this . . . once he kissed her in the elevator and on . . . was fantastic.
aroundsundown chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
First they're at SEATAC (Alice parks her car at long term at SeaTac), the next moment they're apparently in PHOENIX Airport (Bella doesn't know how far a walk from the security to their boarding gate because she hadn't been to Phoenix Airport in years). Apparently they're flying to SAN DIEGO (Alice says San Diego has more authentic Mexican food, being 10 miles to the Mexican border. and so I assume their destination is San Diego) Then the moment they land Alice says they're in ARIZONA ("I guess things are more authentic in Arizona") but the next paragraph Bella gets excited over SOUTHERN CALIFORNIA'S weather.

All these inconsistencies in place names! What gives? If you're not good at Geography, just stick with one name. Don't try to mix it up with nicknames, state names etc.
KittyAsrai chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Loved it!
hillybob chapter 1 . 7/28/2014
Ooh I love that elevator scene and this fits perfectly. Brilliant and hot as always thanks for sharing with us xxxxx
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