Reviews for Hidden Seam
almondgirl3 chapter 1 . 4/12
this was both really interesting and disappointing. it just want fleshed out and it needed to be. ironic that the feeling of time was missing from this story. it went far too quick which made it just a bit hard to believe. Would've been awesome if it was more than...just more
k1942 chapter 1 . 4/7
Lovely and magical, I really enjoyed reading this!
DanceLuvPeace chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Wow... just... wow
I don't have words to describe how magical this story was.
I. LOVED. IT. 3 3
audiblyausten chapter 1 . 12/7/2014
I'd love so much if you expanded this into a multi-chaptered story. The concept is really interesting, but there are so many sides to the story that you left unexplored. Why did she go back to her dimension? What, exactly, is the Last Original? What happened to the other Gatekeepers? Why was Edward able to promise she'd never have to return to her dimension?
Guest chapter 1 . 11/3/2014
Wow ! Good story
reberebecca chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
Così strana e particolare questa one-shot. Piena di dettagli. L'ho trovata originale e intrigante. Mi è piaciuta molto.
Complimenti!
( pian piano leggerò tutte le tue storie perchè trovo che scrivi divinamente)
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rebe
fuz chapter 1 . 7/24/2014
Perfect!
Thanks.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Beautifully written.
KissMeI'mScottish chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
Cried right before the end there, a short story but a sweet one.
ParasiteGoddess chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
Wow! That was awesome. I really enjoyed this I have no idea why I'm just now reading it, but I'm happy I did. melissa
mo kagen chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
thank you!
doindoinx chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
I would have enjoyed a longer version of this; nonetheless, I have enjoyed the read just like your other stories.

The elements of sci-fi and fantasy in the alternate universes you've provided are much appreciated. Cheers to more!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
This needs to be developed into a real chapter book!
twiclare chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
I'm not familiar with the song but loved the story. Thank you.
jterry453 chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Well that was interesting!
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