Reviews for An Adventure Within I
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17
i like your story but you need to write more
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
That was SOOO good I love harry potter fanfiction and am very hard pressed when it comes to the fanfiction part I am inpressed please keep writing about it and well please just keep writing
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
this is good your very talented
Jazmine Cruz chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Please update. Its a good story
Mme bookworm chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Good beginning. Would like to read more.
harryginny9 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
great beginning. Please update soooooooon
Skyeward MusicLover chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
great intro to the story
Alisha chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Please continue I love stories about the Maude's and lily reading the books