Reviews for An Adventure Within I
Jessicatuni chapter 1 . 3/20
Please more
Guest chapter 1 . 2/21
Pls pls pleeaasseee update soon!I'm not sure if you are still planning on continuing this story...but pls update.
Love the comment the female Gryffindor made.
JerryTheWaddleDee chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
Did you die?
Teacup Unicorn chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
The beginning is great, and I died laughing when I saw, "'Were they carrying BOOKS?'" XD
Please continue this because it's amazing and I SO want to see everyone's reaction at the third book.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Amazing!
SakuraLuck chapter 1 . 6/2/2016
Maybe a clumsy God accident dropped them..? Please update its... Interesting
Murasaki Hina chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
WHY?! I want to read this shit! Update now!
MaddyR chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
More please! This looks great - oh, it's been like two years. Tell me you haven't DROPPED this!?
Chibi-Twan chapter 1 . 8/27/2015
I Would absolutely love for you to update this soon it says you posted it a while ago and I think it's coming along great it's better than some of the other beginning chapters I've seen for the Harry Potter fandom!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
i like your story but you need to write more
Guest chapter 1 . 3/15/2014
That was SOOO good I love harry potter fanfiction and am very hard pressed when it comes to the fanfiction part I am inpressed please keep writing about it and well please just keep writing
Guest chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
this is good your very talented
Jazmine Cruz chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
Please update. Its a good story
Mme bookworm chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
Good beginning. Would like to read more.
harryginny9 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
great beginning. Please update soooooooon
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