Reviews for Heated Excitement
EeveeTheImmortal chapter 8 . 7/15
This is the kind of thing you don't know you want until it's right in front of you
Remnant7 chapter 24 . 7/10
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24
The only way to make this one better is if the girls had swapped remotes with each other so no one had their own remote and they could mess with each other like that.
Edwardbeyer chapter 1 . 4/7
know. bloody adaptive keyboard
Edwardbeyer chapter 1 . 4/7
arse and arsehole are the British terms for it, so they are grammatically correct. leave off about what you don't knife.
AngstyRWBYChild chapter 40 . 4/4
I love this. Is this going to ever be updated, possibly? Or is it completely done?
Guest chapter 7 . 3/31
P.S. Fuck you dumbASS!
Guest chapter 6 . 3/31
LOVED IT! Just wish it had a bit more Ruby x Penny.
Sir Attlich chapter 1 . 2/27
An Arctic Monkey reference in a RWBY smutfic...I can now die happy.
Castiel317 chapter 2 . 2/8
im not complaining they are good and all but why...why are their FORTY CHAPTERS (this is sarcastic and meant as a joke didn't want to offend your writing abilities if i did i am sorry)
Majora Solaris chapter 23 . 1/12
i noticed theres no song for this chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 1/9
Can we please get a new chapter of this? My girlfriend and I both really enjoy your writing, and we both were so disappointed to see this hasn’t been updated in almost a year!
Obsidian Prime chapter 23 . 1/2
The song for chapter 23 is Animals by Maroon 5.
Guest chapter 40 . 12/18/2017
Well not a single update since January which is pretty much the entire year. Safe to say this story is dead. What a disappointment. Welp, time to find some other RWBY smut
Sigurd chapter 31 . 11/26/2017
This is bad and you should feel bad for writing it.
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