Reviews for Heated Excitement
wearedeadpool chapter 28 . 1/3
great chapter.
wearedeadpool chapter 6 . 9/9/2021
i thought I recognized the chapter title.
wearedeadpool chapter 1 . 8/5/2021
i just noticed that this story was made back in 2013 and was last updated in 2017, so this story was first made 8 years ago, and it was last updated 4 years ago, this being first made 8 years ago is actually kinda crazy to think about honestly.
wearedeadpool chapter 10 . 7/13/2021
really liked the Jaune part.
wearedeadpool chapter 8 . 7/13/2021
great chapter.
Urtoryu chapter 13 . 3/13/2021
Oh no! The plot is attacking our porn! We need to defend it!
Okay, let's be honest, plot is not bad. Plot can create drama, and that brings feelings and emotions, those emotions make the erotic scenes more satisfying. That's why I like doujins with a story. Actually, the emotions that are born from context are the basis of many fetishes. Incest for example doesn't change anything on the actual scene other than maybe some dialogues, it only changes the way you feel about it. Conclusion, plot in smut is a good thing.
Also, I'm looking forward to the other volumes beeing included here. Emerald, Mercury and Neo in the mix would be really good, with volume 3 we can get Winter, Qrow and maybe even minor characters like Neon and Flynt or Ciel, and because this fic goes up to 2017, maybe we get some Salem at the end.
ChuckG65 chapter 39 . 11/4/2020
I know this story is long dead but I really enjoy the power dynamic between Jaune and Cinder
Guest chapter 16 . 8/30/2019
can you do velvet x pyrrha x opizn
Guest chapter 40 . 4/23/2019
good chapter.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2019
Uh where was Mercury? I thought it said Yuro Lowenthal was gonna be in it at the top...
Anonymous chapter 40 . 12/12/2018
Please continue the story
Groomsman chapter 40 . 11/5/2018
Hi, I already made a review asking for a threesom for Yang, Nora and Glynda and a threesom with Ruby, Reese and Arslan. I just want to specify, for the YangxNoraxGlynda could you make it rough and have breast feeding. And for the RubyxReesexArslan have toys. And for either one of those two have body writing. Please and thank you.
Groomsman chapter 38 . 10/31/2018
Could you do one featuring Arslan Altan and May Zedong doing Ruby. And a threesome with Yang, Nora and Glynda, please.
Disguised Bean chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
;o

this is so gud, I wish my Dom liked RWBY ~
EeveeTheImmortal chapter 8 . 7/15/2018
This is the kind of thing you don't know you want until it's right in front of you
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