Reviews for A Champion and his Queen
Superstar Kid chapter 24 . 8/6/2014
I like this story it was great, action excitement, and it had the one thing I was really looking forward to when I read grey trilogy. The Hawke reunion. Bethany being reunited with Hawke. I liked his reaction and of course what happens when everything in Kirkwall went belly up. I was surprised that Hawke sided with the Templars but I understood the reasons. I like the aftermath of it and he and Isabela's daughter named Leandra and Isabela taking her original name back. Fenris and Lin being a couple. Solon meeting them. From some of the parts of the ending I can tell you read the Masked Empire. With what happened to the ending. I wonder if with the Elvuians being opened now, how will Bethany and Merrill react to meeting the elf who opened them. That alone is a story right there (Not to mention it might be a side mission in DAI) Love to see what happens next. Keep it up
snachie1 chapter 23 . 7/10/2014
Such a great story! Waiting for more.
Anonymous1684 chapter 23 . 4/25/2014
Yes, please continue this universe
Apollo Wings chapter 23 . 4/25/2014
Very well done.
I think you have too much on your plate though my dear friend. If the muse hits you- write more.
If not, we'll all understand! Xxx
Apollo Wings chapter 22 . 4/7/2014
Isabela!s first impression of Hawke... Very intriguing! Xxx
Apollo Wings chapter 21 . 3/21/2014
As much as I can love Anders sometimes I hate him too when the Chantry is blown up. Just wait for the Tdotm universe version of events because it'll be bloody and Hawke will be INCREDIBLY angry. Sometimes I wish we never had to ally with him xxx
Apollo Wings chapter 20 . 3/10/2014
How Carver knew that Anders done goofed! And a way to reverse the taint, excellent reading xxx
Apollo Wings chapter 19 . 3/1/2014
A lovely chapter and yet again, a brilliant character introspection into Bethany and Isabela xxx
Kylemoor chapter 18 . 2/25/2014
For every despicable deed a person is capable of there is always one thing that disgusts them.
Apollo Wings chapter 18 . 2/24/2014
Honour amongst thieves, and it's truer than anything - a street full of wastrels, burglars and other nasty sorts can all leave their doors open and know nothing will happen.
Sometimes, those people do have the best morals, because black and white are easy to define, and what they see as the dark, bad side - truly is. But everything else is shades of grey - like smuggling, pirating etc - it pays the bills.
Yet again, you'd captured Isabela perfectly, not just some tart xxx
Anonymous1684 chapter 17 . 2/23/2014
When are you going to get back to your best story arc and finish this story?
Apollo Wings chapter 17 . 2/10/2014
Yay! More Garrett/Isabela! Xxx
Apollo Wings chapter 16 . 1/30/2014
Yes dear, sorry dear! Arika has Carver well trained! Xxx
Kylemoor chapter 15 . 1/19/2014
Would it be possible to save Thrask? Oh, and good job putting Justice in his place.
Apollo Wings chapter 15 . 1/19/2014
Gah, stop this amazingness... you're making me feel incredibly wallflower-esque as an author here... writing such fantastic stories all at the same time.
*curses* *hugs* Share with me! xxx
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