Considering the fact that Hope is now Lady Potter instead of merely Heiress Potter, shouldn't Umbridge be facing some serious political consequences for using a Blood Quill on her?
Also, she could sue Fudge and the ministry for slander and defamation of a Head of House...
Just saying...

While reading this chapter, I realize something that the wizarding world has never taken into consideration. Given that hopes leg is not healing like it should, why couldn’t they come up with a broom-equivalent of a wheelchair? That way, hope would stay off of her bed like more and allow it to heal properly.

Might follow cannon but this is definitely gonna be a different story

I understand for plot purposes, but why didn’t she just read Salazar’s diary to see if he wrote anything about the Chamber and it’s Monster?

I can’t believe she slapped a professor that is… I don’t know whether it’s mental or brilliant. He totally deserved it for that comment.

First of all, amazing story! I’ve binge read the first two years and I am absolutely loving it! You’re a really talented writer and I am thrilled that you shared this awesome fic with us! Hope and all the other characters are absolutely hilarious and you’ve made me laugh out loud a few times, which is quite impressive, since I always try to keep a straight face while reading, since I do most of it during class. I’ve been looking forward to your version of third year since the beginning, so I am really excited to continue reading. I can’t wait for Sirius to be introduced and wonder how you’re going to handle their relationship now that Hope doesn’t look that much like James, which did seem to be one of the reasons why Sirius liked Harry so much, in canon.

I was just having a thought! Obviously George and Hope are meant for each other, you’ve written their relationship really well they’re absolutely sickeningly adorable, but imagine George’s excitement when he discovers Hope is the daughter of his Marauder Idol, Prongs! He’s going to go absolutely nuts! He’ll probably ask her to marry him on the spot, I imagine!

Oh god! Please don’t kill off Dobby and don’t kill off Sirius, most important don’t kill off Fred.

The "canon-compliant" tag scared me off for a long time, but now that I'm reading I see many differences, very original detail

How boring! I mean, it's just 'she' instead of 'he' and 'Hope' instead of 'Harry'. Basically a copy paste of canon. What a waste of words. . . .

14 Dumbledores! Voldemort wouldn't know which one is real until he got him!

Once again, metamorph. There should have been not 7 Potters, but like 14 of the same person flying about.

I don't like the way this panned out. Too many inconsistencies. Why didn't she take the invisibility clock? She already knew who Moony is, she should have know who made the map. I'm not saying its bad to have the map confiscated, but do it in a more plausible way.

A metamorph should be able to transform into anyone without needing polyjuice. A solo mission to get info would work the same. Brewing the potion just seems like trying too hard to stick to canon.

I'm rereading this AGAIN for like the 5th time because I needed a serotonin boost. So thank you for that.

This is very close to Cannon but also very nice! Wonder if Snape hates her..