Reviews for Looking Beyond
Guest chapter 166 . 8/13
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hpmick13 chapter 40 . 2/25
I really tried to read this but there's just a lot which makes no sense

They can regrow bones overnight, regrow skin and muscles so her injury makes no sense. Plus for some reason the author likes her being injured as it seems to happen regularly.

Before the whole Chamber of Secrets part she told Dumbledore and Snape she owned Salazar Slytherin's diary, how would they not have worked out her relation to Slytherin especially because Greengrass said the family tree was well documented

The story follows canon too strictly in that the author forces things to confirm to canon while ignoring changes that they've made

This bit about the map confuses me because in an earlier chapter Fred asks Hope how did she know he was Fred and she responds "I solemnly swear I'm up to no good" now it's showing she knew nothing about the map.

I cannot see any scenario where Sirius would physically hurt Hope, since it's shown he's thinking clearly plus things like that only work in movies

So many other inconsistencies
alitheclown15 chapter 68 . 1/28
imagining india Elsey
Guest chapter 5 . 12/27/2023
I absolutely love this fanfic! The writing is incredible and I love the scenes with George and hope! Thank you for this amazing fic!
Kaylen.b4444 chapter 81 . 11/20/2023
This story makes no sense. You keep following canon which contradicts all of your original ideas
Kaylen.b4444 chapter 20 . 11/20/2023
This is exactly like canon. We’ve all read the HP books, no need to drag it out. Great ideas in this story so far that should’ve been the main focus instead of following canon.
Child of Dreams chapter 81 . 6/12/2023
Considering the fact that Hope is now Lady Potter instead of merely Heiress Potter, shouldn't Umbridge be facing some serious political consequences for using a Blood Quill on her?
Also, she could sue Fudge and the ministry for slander and defamation of a Head of House...
Just saying...
ScarletRainbow1 chapter 9 . 4/24/2023
While reading this chapter, I realize something that the wizarding world has never taken into consideration. Given that hopes leg is not healing like it should, why couldn’t they come up with a broom-equivalent of a wheelchair? That way, hope would stay off of her bed like more and allow it to heal properly.
acowles02 chapter 1 . 3/22/2023
Might follow cannon but this is definitely gonna be a different story
loadinguser1103 chapter 34 . 1/2/2023
I understand for plot purposes, but why didn’t she just read Salazar’s diary to see if he wrote anything about the Chamber and it’s Monster?
Faith chapter 50 . 10/10/2022
I can’t believe she slapped a professor that is… I don’t know whether it’s mental or brilliant. He totally deserved it for that comment.
Denise chapter 35 . 10/10/2022
First of all, amazing story! I’ve binge read the first two years and I am absolutely loving it! You’re a really talented writer and I am thrilled that you shared this awesome fic with us! Hope and all the other characters are absolutely hilarious and you’ve made me laugh out loud a few times, which is quite impressive, since I always try to keep a straight face while reading, since I do most of it during class. I’ve been looking forward to your version of third year since the beginning, so I am really excited to continue reading. I can’t wait for Sirius to be introduced and wonder how you’re going to handle their relationship now that Hope doesn’t look that much like James, which did seem to be one of the reasons why Sirius liked Harry so much, in canon.

I was just having a thought! Obviously George and Hope are meant for each other, you’ve written their relationship really well they’re absolutely sickeningly adorable, but imagine George’s excitement when he discovers Hope is the daughter of his Marauder Idol, Prongs! He’s going to go absolutely nuts! He’ll probably ask her to marry him on the spot, I imagine!
EverFlawless chapter 69 . 9/29/2022
Oh god! Please don’t kill off Dobby and don’t kill off Sirius, most important don’t kill off Fred.
BerserkLittleCook chapter 1 . 10/13/2021
The "canon-compliant" tag scared me off for a long time, but now that I'm reading I see many differences, very original detail
Guest chapter 60 . 10/12/2021
How boring! I mean, it's just 'she' instead of 'he' and 'Hope' instead of 'Harry'. Basically a copy paste of canon. What a waste of words. . . .
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