Reviews for Looking Beyond
Fiction is the Truth chapter 40 . 12/28/2017
It even funnier since Sirius saw all this.
Fiction is the Truth chapter 37 . 12/28/2017
I still think it’s funny that there was a legit betting pool
Fiction is the Truth chapter 35 . 12/28/2017
Literally the whole school ships them.
Fiction is the Truth chapter 22 . 12/28/2017
Please, make this girl have logic and get him a trial.
Fiction is the Truth chapter 12 . 12/27/2017
The Official Storyteller Of Gryffindor Tower.
Fiction is the Truth chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
James Potter’s daughter two pranksters Marauder in the making.
Ashlyn chapter 1 . 12/22/2017
You were the first fan fiction author I ever read in my life! You introduced me to fan fiction. I'm so glad I found your story! If I hadn't, I would never have discovered fan fiction! I wouldn't be the person I am today without it. I love you work so much, keep up the good work!
(Lol I should be writing this on the last chapter but anyways..)
-Ash
Guest chapter 166 . 12/17/2017
This was an amazing saga. Ive enjoyed every moment of it. Thank you.
Guest chapter 166 . 11/30/2017
HeWhoReviews. Well that was a marathon read but well worth it. A fully coloured and detailed AU with ginger love thrown in. Nice one.
StarryArtist chapter 1 . 11/28/2017
Book 8? There are only seven...
Fangirl chapter 166 . 11/2/2017
I completed this story in 5 days! Remember I still had school! It was so good that I couldn't stop reading it!
Qarz chapter 120 . 10/6/2017
Ok so far ive kinda enjoyed this story, mainly because you made Harry's in this case Hope's character a bit more independent and proactive, more willing to do the right things (and no longer using those damn stunners all the time).
A few points though:
1. I mostly approve of the slight differences between some events, however i think it kinda started to interfere with the canon story by the end of the 5th book (Kreacher with mirror, Hope trying to kill Bella etc.). I think you would do much better if you just followed those new developments rather then to give us some pretty stupid explanations for how it didnt matter and its still canon (like missing AK on Bella, really?) Or how in 6th book she finds Malfoy in the bathrooms but does nothing about it after and Dumbles just replaces her ring with ressurection stone and she doesnt notice.
2. Also wanted to comment on her pairing with George. From the begging it felt kinda forced since he was waaay OOC but ive come to accept it. When you think about it, it really makes a certain kind of sense for her to be with him, specially with this new angrier and more ruthless version of the character. Im kinda disappointed you didnt include him at least in some of her adventures which would probably only solidify their relationship
3. Some characters keep saying how she is very similar to Tom Riddle in his youth, however you really did not act on it so far. There are a few scenes, mostly when she is angry but nothing big so far.
4. As i wrote a few times already let her do something that would really affect the course of the story more. It feels like you are artificially throwing the story back to canon everytime you write something off canon.
Maybe it feels like a bit of forcing opinions on you but since its your story you can do whatever the hell you want with it. It is good and i will most likely read it throught.
Vanadis4 chapter 53 . 9/28/2017
Does this get original soon? Because you're just rewriting the books with Hope instead. When it comes to the important bits it's like you've just copied and pasted the script, which gets tiresome eventually and I'm not sure if I want to read another few hundred thousand words if it's just the same.
Svn0One chapter 12 . 8/27/2017
doesn't it go:
Blunt the knives and bent the forks!
Smash the bottles and burn the corks!
Chip the glasses and crack the plates!
That's what Bilbo Baggins hates
greenhairedwiz chapter 8 . 8/14/2017
always. that world sent me flying
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