Reviews for Looking Beyond
BerserkLittleCook chapter 1 . 9/9/2021
14 Dumbledores! Voldemort wouldn't know which one is real until he got him!
Taryth chapter 121 . 8/13/2021
Once again, metamorph. There should have been not 7 Potters, but like 14 of the same person flying about.
Taryth chapter 50 . 8/11/2021
I don't like the way this panned out. Too many inconsistencies. Why didn't she take the invisibility clock? She already knew who Moony is, she should have know who made the map. I'm not saying its bad to have the map confiscated, but do it in a more plausible way.
Taryth chapter 29 . 8/11/2021
A metamorph should be able to transform into anyone without needing polyjuice. A solo mission to get info would work the same. Brewing the potion just seems like trying too hard to stick to canon.
CatCrowned chapter 1 . 7/30/2021
I'm rereading this AGAIN for like the 5th time because I needed a serotonin boost. So thank you for that.
Guest chapter 42 . 5/5/2021
This is very close to Cannon but also very nice! Wonder if Snape hates her..
Fairy King Oberon chapter 6 . 1/15/2021
There is nothing wrong with being smart and clever until you decide that what you know is the end all be all of everything and anything contradicting it is wrong and to be looked down on. Don't get me wrong, Hermione is awesome but in year 1 she had about as much tact as Ron.
Fairy King Oberon chapter 4 . 1/15/2021
yeah no that's not how medicine works. if there is a way to fix something and no good reason not to do it, it gets fixed. If magical healing has some reason that it is not to be used, St Mungos wouldn't be nearly as big as it is because they would just use muggle hospitals. There is no reason for Madam Pomfrey to withhold magical treatment of her leg except malice or spite.
Fairy King Oberon chapter 1 . 1/13/2021
So her hair is short, but has waves that Ginny would want if her hair was long enough? is Ginny bald or is Hope's hair longer than you made it out to be?
67mpala chapter 40 . 12/27/2020
*cackles*
SleepyFluffball chapter 3 . 11/30/2020
Hope has a point. Sanity is overrated and doesn't exist.
avidnarutofan chapter 121 . 11/22/2020
Of all the things you could have changed in canon, it was having Hedwig survive. It would be a small change. Why the fuck didn't you? I normally don't swear in a review but I think this situation warrants it.
joycezhanng chapter 4 . 11/2/2020
i was excited to see how snape would treat hope (seeing as how he's in love with lily and hope looks exactly like her) but i was disappointed, honestly.
joycezhanng chapter 3 . 11/2/2020
why can't she have her leg magically fixed? she stands out so much with her cast and weird cane thing
joycezhanng chapter 2 . 11/2/2020
hmmm i thought petunia would have treated hope better since she looks exactly like a pre-hogwarts lily, and that's when petunia and lily loved each other the most... i can't really see petunia feeling comfortable with abusing lily's literal carbon copy.

i don't know how i feel about george with hope (too much ginger, and frankly, they have more of a siblings vibe). i like the idea of her with cedric, or maybe even blaise zambini or draco malfoy - it adds some spice.
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