|Reviews for First Kiss On|
| Lovable person chapter 1 . 7/23
Me: *read title * Will Olaf ever make it to the beach? Will he? (Singing: I don't care! I ship it! I ship it!)
Fabfic: *face palms* Seriously?
Me: The story was great. So shut up Fabric!
| sophia chapter 8 . 11/5/2016
I dont know about the last two chapters and this one i think you could have done something to it make it catching or something.
| Anjion chapter 16 . 4/22/2016
Please finish this! This is great! I want more!
| Anjion chapter 11 . 4/22/2016
Uh oh, poor Elsa. Fantastic writing!
| Anjion chapter 6 . 4/22/2016
Olaf is such a cutie pie! I'm really enjoying this!
| Anjion chapter 4 . 4/22/2016
This is great! The idea of Olaf having long-distance hearing is really amusing! I love it!
| IndyGirl89 chapter 16 . 2/26/2016
Yeah, I already figured there was something a little off about Marcus. Wonder what Elsa's reaction will be when she finds out?
| IndyGirl89 chapter 15 . 2/26/2016
Whatever Elsa says, I think she deserves to be happy with someone.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 14 . 2/26/2016
I don't think it was fair that Anna had her memories of Elsa's magic removed. She probably wouldn't have treated Elsa any different had she actually known.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 13 . 2/26/2016
Elsa always thinks that running away will solve her problems, but it doesn't. It just makes them worse.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 12 . 2/26/2016
Hmm, I'm curious about Marcus's real name, if he has one.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 11 . 2/25/2016
Whoa, that was slightly out of character for Elsa, kissing Marcus like that. Hope this doesn't ruin her possible marriage prospects.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 10 . 2/24/2016
Wow, Elsa is not pressured at all, is she? Especially judging from her calling card.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 9 . 2/24/2016
Yep, I knew Anna would be upset after finding out that her memories of Elsa's magic were removed. Personally, I think that was the worst decision their parents could have made, first removing those memories and then hiding Elsa's magic from her.
| IndyGirl89 chapter 8 . 2/24/2016
The nerve of that guy, requesting a private audience with Elsa - the queen, mind you - to discuss trivial matters. I agree with Elsa in wanting to spear him with an ice spike.