Reviews for My Mother's Love
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24
What you write about Dumbledore is true.

I just want to point out that this part of the story is soon after Harry uses the Stone to speak to his mother, because it would make more sense to have this discussion earlier, before Harry walks to his death. What does his mother say to him in the book? She basically said "I gave my life so that you would not die a quick, painless death, but instead you would suffer for fifteen years and live a life so miserable that you would be willing to die. It was so worth it, and I am proud of you." Is this really what a loving mother would say or want for her child? Especially as she says that being dead is not bad. So fifteen years of happy afterlife would be much better than fifteen years of suffering with the Dursleys and Dumbledore.
ak chapter 1 . 5/24
bonne fic!
stacygrrl2002 chapter 1 . 8/29/2017
My kind of interpretation of the plot line. Nicely done. Felt a bit hurried right at the end. I like the way you think.
MegaHeracross214 chapter 1 . 11/8/2016
Please continue this story.
hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 9/5/2016
loved the story for beginning to end
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2016
I loved this story. It's very well written, and the plot is good. This would be a great first chapter for a time travel story. One of the better ones I've read.
PoseidonPrince chapter 1 . 4/2/2016
Crismebella chapter 1 . 8/29/2015
Cute! Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2015
Me gusta.
Mmars69 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
Bigger Bang! I love it!
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Thank you for this story. You pulled off a considerable feat by making a story simultaneously fluffy and substantial.

You cleared up a large number of plot holes that JKR (bless her) left and in a way that seems much more satisfying. In canon, the best we can do is conclude that Dumbledore managed to pull off a very deep, insanely dangerous plan from the grave. It kind of makes sense, but in hindsight really pushes one's suspension of disbelief.

The way you finish off Voldemort is entirely novel and fun. Of course H&H finally get together and in a satisfying way, though a fanon-type soul bond is a bit gratuitous IMHO.

While this is a one-shot, it would be fun to see this extended into a ten chapter or so story.

D. Page Robin
jonski chapter 1 . 1/7/2015
SO glad there is no albus severus potter.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 11/29/2014
hisnhers chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Well done. I like the grandfatherly idea of Dumbledore, but he was truly a manipulative man...

Deathday Party Planner chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
Nice ending, I always wondered why JKR picked Dumbledore for the Kingscross scene. I much prefer your version. Thanks for sharing!
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