Reviews for 101 Fun Things To Do At Wal-Mart
765sullivan chapter 2 . 3/18
Beautiful! I truly enjoy your type of writing, it flows nicely.
omega chapter 1 . 12/29/2014
Awesome puns( I mean it)
I hope you don't mind if I borrow some jokes, do you?
oh, and PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY?( uses puppy face! It's super effective!)
k wolf chapter 2 . 12/29/2014
love the story!(espescially since I love POKEMON!)
I feel as though I could easily Crush Blake and Yang's teams w/ my current Pokémon Y team
Weiss Schneezed chapter 2 . 12/8/2014
I know you haven't updated this in a while but I would love it so much if you would :)
Dragxon chapter 2 . 12/2/2014
*Raises hand* Me, me, me I want a third I do, I do. In a seriousness though this is really good and I wouldn't mind seeing more of it.
Fourze chapter 2 . 11/5/2014
Infinii chapter 2 . 9/6/2014
Loving the story so far, pleasantly surprised it has passed all expectations. :D
Infinii chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Awww. I ship Bumblebee so hard this is great. :D Thank you for sharing!
TheVictoriousMC chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
I love this stuff :) it's so funny. Yang's character is hilarious, and with the rest of team RWBY in an AU setting? No wonder it's so humorous!
Please write more.
minedork chapter 2 . 7/17/2014
I literally died laughing from the first chapter, please make a third chapter, please.
Conner chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
A great read! I really enjoyed both chapters. The way Blake and Yang bicker is simply wonderful! And before I forget, great puns from Ms. Long! Please make more chapters! :D
ArtisticallyArisen chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
This is sooooooo cool! Pokémon and RWBY. POKEMON AND RWBY?! MY DREAMS HAVE COME TRUE AT LASTKHGKDCDNITDGHIHKHFKHKFEHVIDBIHVF! Sugar rush... Back to what I was saying: This is really good! You should keep going with this! :3
Gracekim1 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
I think a 3rd chapter would be great cuz your story is awesome!
Gracekim1 chapter 2 . 5/10/2014
Awesome! Maybe they could got to a theme park from a voucher they found in the wal-Mart shop?
Slayer-ONE chapter 2 . 4/18/2014
Please continue. I loved the thought of Yang actually being shy around Blake so she doesn't scare her away.
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