|Reviews for Riddle And The Ancient Contract|
| EnasReadingNook chapter 55 . 11/22
hANDS DOWN MY FAVORITE STORY ON THIS SITE! sO WELL DONE AND I COULD NOT STOP READING!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/9
Really enjoyed this story an entertaining read
| Guest chapter 55 . 10/30
Wow! This was a great story to read. I enjoyed it all. Is there going to be a sequel? You left it open for one. Even if there is no sequel this is still going on my favorites list and will be reread a few times. Thank you for taking the time to write and share such a fun story.
| Shiaira73 chapter 55 . 10/30
I left a review a few moments ago and then realized i wasnt logged in. lol. anyways, its a great story and whether there is a sequel or not, i will be reading it again. thanks for writing it.
| SapphireKageKyuura chapter 7 . 10/12
Hari wouldn't be at the Dursley's for a number of reasons.
1: She left to the Ministry of Magic to get married to Thomas Riddle aka Lord Slytherin.
2: She hates the Dursley's, and wished to have revenge. So once she married Tom, she sent him along with some of his death eater's to torture and kill them, then burn the house down. So of course she wouldn't have any reaction to them being killed. As for her their deaths would be a relief.
3: If Tom and some of his death eater's didn't kill the Dursley's, than Hari would have killed them herself before leaving England all together. But she married Tom so she had more of a reason to stay in England. But still extract her revenge on Dumblefuck for ruining her life - for keeping her in an abusive household - for keeping secrets about her inheritance, and the fact she had money, titles and houses in which she belonged to. She wouldn't have cared that the Dursley's were killed. They were her tormentors, her abusers. To her they've already condemned themselves.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/12
hilarious how literally chapter one you have harriet declare that she would be fine losing all her money and her magic to avoid a marriage she doesn't want... then chapter two you have her willing to marry the genocidal classist lunatic who started a civil war, murdered both her parents and one of her friends, tried to kill her on at least two(possibly three) occasions so far, and is directly responsible for upwards of nintey percent of the problems in her life.
either have her acknowledge that he could rape and torture her with her magic or without and thus it's better to keep it(and with it her only way to ever possibly fight or get respect on a scale that matters) by marrying him, or have her cling tightly to the magical world(as would be reasonable for the starved abused orphan who was saved by a magical world and spent their happiest years and made all their friends in it) or remove the 'loss of magic' clause altogether, but the way you handled this is perhaps one of the worst ways to do so, because it destabilizes characterization in a stupid and poorly-handled way.
| TranoMoon chapter 55 . 8/31
I'm glad that I found this story, as I have greatly enjoyed reading it. I do wish that it had gone on for longer before reaching the epilogue, but I can understand that this was the end you decided for it. And I am glad that this story has an ending, as far too many good stories never end up finished. Thank you for taking the time to write this story.
| TranoMoon chapter 50 . 8/30
Honestly, I think Tom and Harry might be my favorite pairing period. Especially stories like this where Tom is very definitely still Dark and could be considered Evil. Truly any story where the Dark side ends up being better to Harry than the Light side ever was.
| Guest chapter 26 . 8/22
destroying those memories containing the rape was stupid. those could have been used against dumbledore to prove negligence and abuse
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/19
| Guest chapter 46 . 6/29
The only complaint I have about this story is Hari's pregnancy symptoms. Thin petite athletic women tend not to show even at 4 months.
Most fit athletic thin pregnant teens certainly don't suffer from back pains and swollen ankles at 4 months. That's more a six or seven month issue.
You write a lot about how Hari can't gain weight, yet she has a swollen belly, back pain, and swollen ankles at 4 months. It's just not realistic.
| Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 6/9
If Hari's name is still Harika, then why does the summary call her Harriett Potter?
| kyra chapter 1 . 4/30
Hi i love this story means a lot to me and your an amazing writer. I just wanted to inform you that there are at least 2 other stories on wattpad that have the same title as your as well as the content. Just wanted to inform you !
your books are amazing ! they kept me up all night
| rmiser1994 chapter 55 . 4/23
Fantastic stoey Thank you! I really enjoyed reading this! .
| MiniHerc chapter 55 . 4/9
Awesome story. Thank you for writing this.