Reviews for Innocence Within
Pippalina chapter 4 . 7/1
eep!
i'm worried about these 2 OC's they're defo gonna cause problems in the future :(
but utterly amazing story so far! :)
Pippalina chapter 2 . 7/1
wait so was he carrying him with his midsection on his shoulder? that's what comes to mid when I think 'like a sack of potatoes' but then how was his mouth anywhere near his neck? for some reason this is driving me mad...
Caoane chapter 4 . 6/4
It is amazing! Levi is a little bad, but Levi is Levi afterall. I'm very anxious to see the next chapters. I hope they won't late so much, uh?!
TerribleTerrors chapter 1 . 5/17
CONTINUE PLEASEEEE WITH CHERRY ON TOP! I got so many feels with this story and it was really AWESOME!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/1
This story is one of my favorites. Please update.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/9
Uhmm.. for next chapter can we have like levi beaten?! Ugh ik its just fanfic but he should not do that to poor eren :'c or at least make levi really really guilty for what he has done.. because I realized he can't be beaten xD
fuckboy-levi chapter 4 . 3/10
my heart.
Guest chapter 4 . 12/17/2014
Aww poor eren, who would you hurt him levi why? Bit besides that please update I really like this!
wir-sind-die-LOKI chapter 4 . 11/29/2014
Levi looking after kid eren is so sweet!
natiwati chapter 3 . 11/23/2014
THIS IS SO GOOD WTF! I can't stop smiling at "He gazed up to look at Levi, whose broad shoulders looked like they could carry the weight of the world". UGH. You truly capture a child's innocence well! I understood his train of thought and slight bouts of fear and panic, and Levi is completely believable in this, unlike a lot of other fanfictions. This is just good. So good!
natiwati chapter 2 . 11/23/2014
The feels are real. I enjoyed this tremendously. T_T
Asrith33 chapter 4 . 11/19/2014
NEXT CHAAPPTTEERRRRRRR!
Asrith33 chapter 2 . 11/19/2014
Awww. You really hit me deep with that one. I never cry when something horrible happens in a story, but reading about that cruelty, and knowing it's an actual thing that you have expertly written about, it made me tear up.
kate-sama chapter 4 . 10/10/2014
Sooo sad. Please update asap. Love this story. :))
Dawn chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
This story is too adorable! 3 Thank you for making me die from the cuteness overload. :3
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