|Reviews for One Shot, One Kiss|
| Guest chapter 11 . 10/28
I know you said you didn't like how this turned out so you probably planned on never updating this again but even if you aren't going to finish it could you at least make a concluding chapter so everything is not just left hanging like this? Just do something. And then you never have to look at this again and you can move on. But at least give some sort of closure
| Reaper4991 chapter 1 . 10/27
Have you considered doing this Naruto?
| Reaper4991 chapter 11 . 10/22
Update and finish
| Damn chapter 1 . 8/23
This shit is super fucking vivid and I love it
| Just wanna say chapter 2 . 8/23
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
Bro... What the hell man.
| Jakeflado chapter 11 . 8/7
Well, since you didn't like how this fic turned out, maybe you could make a reboot one of these days. After reading some of your other fics; ALNW, Boil, Icha Icha: World, etc. I think you could make an even better version of this fic. It would probably be easier since the series is nearing its end. But, it's up to you whether or not you decide to do that and I look forward to your current and future stories. Also, here's your belated happy birthda for 2014...HAPPY BIRTHDAY! I'll make a note to wish you happy birthday this year XD
| BlipBeepum chapter 11 . 8/1
Hey man, wanted to say that this fic of yours has always been one of my favorites, and I really admire your writing. I was also...kinda curious if you'd be interested in accepting a fic request; specifically being Bleach related, and about futanari Rukia having a threesome with Jackie Tristan and Riruka. Heck it'd be kind of hilarious if Rukia were to literally kick Ichigo in the face and tell him how she's going to finally be the star of something. And honestly it could just be porn without plot, I'm just really thirsty for futa rukia banging bleach girls. Thank you for all you've done man, just with the effort you've put into your writing and the time you've given to us!
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/30
Same guest as below. To add to the abilities ichigo's zanpakuto should have now are renji's and soi fon's too that I forgot in my last message. That's a lot of powers but I would definitely be curious to see what you come up with combining all of them.
Also I don't know if you have the ending to this story already planned out but I'm hoping the girls who are hypnotised become unhypnotised. What they decide to do afterwards is of course up to you but it would give some resolution to the story like your naruto one since even smut has to have a proper conclusion
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/30
I do realise this really isn't the focus of this story but at some point either in another chapter of this or a new story I would like to see another fight scene. What you've done so far is mix ichigo's zanpakuto with rukia's and rangiku's. Now that we have been given another power of sode no shirayuki (the temperature control absolute zero stuff) and her bankai you have that to add to the mix too as well as Katen kyokotsu's power whom ichigo also subjugated. I would be really curious how you could mix all these powers into one.
Apart from that just in my personal opinion it would be more interesting if all of the insensate women in ichigo's pile of flesh, especially bambietta now that we know her personality were to come back to their senses. It's pretty boring to have scenes of characters where they do nothing but take it. Bambi's personality especially would be really interesting especially unhypnotised. You could even do a scene where she wakes up and starts panicking but to no avail. Maybe even when her 'friends' are introduced.
Speaking of them even though gisele is pretty much confirmed a guy in one of the data books I would make her a girl anyway if you were going to add her in but that's up to you. Good story. There isn't another one like this so it's unique in that aspect. Honestly I like ichigo better like this than I do in canon. As a character and not as a person. It's just more fun to read then generic shonen protagonist #417. Even if I do think he's slightly better than most in that regard. At least he's not an idiot but he still can't escape the fate of being oblivious and a prude.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27
At this point there's no way this will be able to be fitted into the story but when you write an epilogue or another story for bleach (whenever I understand that you'll want to have a long break after finishing this) could you write something for reigai and mod soul personalities. I think it would be interesting to see a sevensome with three rangiku sand three rukias (normal, reigai and mod soul in gigai) all with different personalities. I think rukia and rangiku are the only 2 females that have had their mod souls shown whether in filler or canon but there were reigai for a lot if them.
Love the story and happy late (or early) birthday to you
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/27
I know it's probably about a year late but happy birthday
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/13
I see that people are making a lot of requests of you. Not sure how many you'll actually consider but most of them are pretty good ideas I think.
Obviously this is secondary to adding as many girls as possible but throughout the story you've introduced different features of the hypno gun like making mahana's breasts huge and turning ikumi into a cat girl. I realise those were just kinda one off gimmicks for a single scene but I think it would be good if you not only reused the features you've already showcased on other girls (so give another girl(s) the same bust size as mahana and give other girls cat features, maybe even both at the same time for one girl) but also came up with new abilities that the gun has and implement them. I can't think of any good ones right now but that's why you're the talented writer.
Apart from that just want to say great story again. While I hope you update again soon I'd rather you take your time so as not to leave anything important out and I patiently look forward to the next chapter.
| monsterfire chapter 6 . 5/29
love the entire story its really good
| guesty chapter 11 . 5/10
I don't know if you plan to update this story again, but if you do, could you turn it to a crossover and take all th girls from other verses like naruto or fairy tail, i mean it would be nice i think...