Reviews for Natsu Dragneel's: Cinderella Story
wow chapter 3 . 1/28/2014
this is awesome cant wait for the next chap
Guest chapter 2 . 1/28/2014
This is sad...
Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
so... a new begining uh?
natluluv chapter 3 . 1/27/2014
Alright so yay! she goes to the ball and the chaps have been a bit longer than the 1st one so take myt review luv u r story animeHIME! hehehe...
Guest chapter 2 . 1/27/2014
This is typical i say T-P-Y-I-C-A-L !
Natluluv chapter 1 . 1/27/2014
I love your story and the chapter is small so pls make the next chapter a bit bigger
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
the story is really good and the chap is a bit short so pls make it bigger
ONceUPonAguEST chapter 3 . 1/12/2014
Dear AnimeHime,
The storyy is really good and the C/L was sometimes confusing pls make up the cnext chapter love the story

NNNMMMNNAMAanime chapter 2 . 1/12/2014
Love it so.. much its good the English is awesome! It feels like i am reading an old story...
star chapter 2 . 1/2/2014
Love u story..
but it wud b best if u described it more its in the chap2 that they asked lucy wether she was not gng to ball. and also who consulted lucy about hairdressing..
it will b great if u explained it a lil mpre detail
Espada 4 Jurabi chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
This is an interesting story and you seem to have a knack for writing Cinderella stories and as a secret: I loved that movie!

If you would like, I would love to Beta Read some of your stories for you.

Try using some preposition phrases and I've noticed a space between two periods. Also, try to capitalize the names of the characters too.

OMG I just Beta Read this! Sorry! :P