*grabs her chest trying in vain to keep her hearth in one piece and stop the bleeding*

Ah, this made me tear up.

It made me tear up because everything just felt so, REAL! You got everything right! From the atmosphere to characters. I didn't want to stop reading until the very end. This was very beautiful!

this is so sweet, but somehow it hurts more than it should :')

Oh wow this was a really good read. It's sad but it's sweet and it gives me a good feeling inside to read this. It was touching when Luffy said he loved his brothers, and his faith in the crew was sweet too.

YOU JUST KEEP ON GIVING ME FEELS U KNO

ASL. I have always had a soft spot for them and your story hit that spot perfectly. Thank you for sharing this fanfiction with us.

This wasn't very sad but it still made me cry!

this is like my fourth time reading this and it never fails to make me tear up.

So sad! I love it!

I like it how Luffy was just, "Zoro?" and Zoro was, "Yeah?" then Luffy called back simply, "Hi, Zoro!"

Luffy said many things to the crews but Zoro. It was just a 'hi'.

If I died out of laughter, it'd be your fault, Writer-san.

It's Baby Den Den Mushi. I love your style of writing you really pulled me in and I love how Luffy knew they were not real straight from the start. You are a great writer

Thank you so much for this beautiful story!

Cute and sad story! Loved it! :)

So, I'm probably a bit of a freak for this, but of all the things I love of this one in particular, its the line 'casually breaking the laws of physics'. It, without fail, makes me giggle much more than it has any right to do.

I could murder you for this you know? But I love this story so much even though I feel my heart breaking and then sewing itself back together for another story of yours.