Reviews for Whats Hidden Inside
Lightening sparks chapter 9 . 4/5
Steve must feel awful
Poor Steve
Poor. Tony
Really good so far, please continue
Lightening sparks chapter 7 . 4/3
The battle of New York?
Oh my God!?

Please update I love this story

Really good

You got the personalities perfect
Lightening sparks chapter 4 . 4/3
What did Howard do to Tony?
Oh My God!?
Poor Tony...
Lightening sparks chapter 1 . 4/3
Uh oh. Tony's in trouble.
there gonna know 'bout everything.
Afghanistan... Palladium Poisoning... Demons... His Father
zoxy2 chapter 19 . 1/16
Awww :) So sweet!

-Zoxy
snakesrule91 chapter 9 . 11/25/2014
Alright this story had the potential to be interesting but your quite frankly atrocious grammar and how rushed this is makes a story that could have been great into a story that barely rates above mediocre. The butchered grammar of your writing makes the rushing seem even worse than it actually is, and the rushing of what was already probably going to be a fast-paced story is really bad. Add in the the massively out of character way you're writing everyone is yet another flaw. And how you just dropped into things, with no explanation of why the Avengers were fighting Loki when this obviously well after the Battle of New York, and well you can see why I have issues with this story. So I suggest finding a beta reader or two, who is very good with spotting and fixing grammatical errors and rushing, and then rewriting this whole story. If you do that, then the finished product might be something I could rate as a 9/10 instead of a 2/10

If you want to reply my email is the alias I used for this review
guardianofdragonlore chapter 23 . 10/13/2014
Wow...,.,.a very deep story.
winter morning frost chapter 5 . 9/11/2014
this is the most amazing thing I have ever read!
Guest chapter 24 . 8/16/2014
Oooh
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 23 . 8/16/2014
AmIng amazing amazing job loved it deffinitky will read the sequel
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 22 . 8/16/2014
Ah No It's really good !
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 21 . 8/16/2014
Intenseness level maximum gosh wow so good but so sad but so awesome love it
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 20 . 8/16/2014
Wow that went bad quick
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 19 . 8/16/2014
Oh my gosh ah just YES!
thatcrazyjellyfish chapter 18 . 8/16/2014
Wow loved it just awesome :)
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