|Reviews for Goodbye, Virginity|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/19
This RAPE! What the actual hell is wrong with you? Violence is not sexy. Abuse is not hot.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
This was really uncomfortable to read, it's rape! This is not okay, this wasn't consensual at all. If you want to write a story like this, put a fucking warning or something- I didn't need to see this today.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2016
Make more please
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25/2016
Edd: Kevin.. Stop!
(Basically rape at this point)
(Carries on raping)
Edd: NOOO stop!
. . .
Edd: Oh... OHHH... Actually... Mmmm
This is fucked up. You're basically supporting rape. Double D didn't want it, and asked Kevin to stop numerous times, and even slapped him to get his point across, and Kevin called him a bitch and carried on fucking him. But, hey, I guess it aroused Double D, so it's ok! :D
... Just because a victim is sexually aroused by whats happening to them, doesn't mean they want it. It's a natural reaction to sex. Double D didn't want it, yet Kevin did not stop. That's called rape. You're acting like rape is sexy or hot or whatever. It's not. Stop supporting disgusting shit like this and get a life.
| Zero chapter 1 . 1/4/2016
... I need a boyfriend... Or a girlfriend. Why must I read these when I'm single? Oh yeah, slightly suppressed sexuality plus lemon research will do that to a girl huh? *giggles*
... I know I'm going to hell for all of this but I've had a crush on Double D since I was 8, and I'm quite jealous of Kevin.
| CandlelessFlame chapter 1 . 11/14/2015
Wowowow at least he managed to study his French in the end if you know what I mean (;;;
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2015
That was intense... like it went from 0-100 like REAL quick. but it was awesome
| lizzysakura21 chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
| FanGirl chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
| ZimVader0017 chapter 1 . 4/12/2014
The tittle made me giggle 'cause I'm immature like that. This was very well written and even though it's supposed to be only smut, it's kinda cute too.
| AngelZ Of DarKness chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
This was great!
| Freekness X Yaoi chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
DAMN! THIS WAS HOT!
| heidipoo chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Very well written, and hot! Well done. c:
| DeadlyMidnightshade chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
You destroyed my childhood in the hottest way possible *-* coo does
| SnapCrack chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
That was amazing. Great job, love this.