Reviews for The Maelstrom's Flock
Rongis chapter 1 . 10/27/2016
Pathetic. All that pain and suffering through the limitless void covered in darkness for de-aging process hahaha there is a reason why you have so little favorites and follows. Good job, so this is how humanity killed creativity.
voidprince chapter 9 . 2/21/2016
Did someone adopt this yet I loved this story
Guest chapter 6 . 8/18/2015
One reason people might call you one something like Takehito quitting MBI in canon is because unless you say so how can anyone tell whether you did it AU on purpose and know what you are doing or you are a complete fool and screwed up because you didn't know canon? I hate fanfics that blindly follow canon. Like you say what is the point? On the other hand I also can't stand fics that screw up everything because they don't know canon and turn it into a complete mess.
Rakaan chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
Well, can't say it wasn't expected.
voidprince chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
That sucks
gamelover41592 chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
let me know who adopts this
Banjo the Fox chapter 2 . 8/18/2015
Good second chapter.
Banjo the Fox chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
Excellently done first chapter, unique take on the whole Naruto traversing to the Sekirei world thing. Was not expecting him to become a baby at all.
Bombertank chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
I'll take this story
AJGuardian chapter 11 . 8/18/2015
Knew it would come to this. Sorry to see you go.
voidprince chapter 10 . 6/3/2015
If I may ask when can we suspect a update?
skg1991 chapter 10 . 5/25/2015
I hoped that Miya would have made him stronger since he'll have to deal with the Sekirei plan eventually...Also Naruto is practically the re-incarnation of a God...he has to be strong.
Guest chapter 10 . 4/6/2015
Please let thee be karasuba
14demigod chapter 10 . 4/1/2015
Murder shido... )
anonymous chapter 10 . 3/22/2015
You should give him karasuba as a sekirei and please make sure not to make it a depressing story please.
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