I'm sorry...WAIT WHAT!?

its true ya know madara was just as strong as hashirama but it was raw power alone that got him killed.

you do know that itachi massacred the clan a few days after sasuke joined the academy right? so why would it happen when he was 7 when IT HAPPENED WHEN HE WAS 6 YEARS OLD!?¡¿!?¡¿

he's in the academy right?

are you mentally ill? omg this is so bad

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The story is really good, but after a certain point it becomes rather monotonous in its predictability. The ending is lack luster in that it doesn't really have an ending, but for this being one of the earlier stories, it is incredibly well done.

damn the fights are getting boring its not how an uchiha with susanoo fights havent u realized madara always used his susanoo first form to take out weaklings well except for the war but ye you dragging out the fights when we both know naruto has the ems and could draw out the full susanoo with ease

nnnnnn the lack of knowledge is disturbing ngl u should of researched alot of things b4 writing it

damn they really fed u wrong information and u fell for it im guessing u know about mangekou special abilities and know that only obito can use kamui its alr tho lol

y not temari high key i would guess naruto would want a strong woman around his age damnit

finally im sick of that kill me jumpsuit and is retarded ways

It was really good while it lasted but lately I've been kind of bored with our blank protagonist, there's only so much emotionless tool one kind take you know

I could help you with the editing if you'd like. There are many, many more errors to correct in the chapters, however, you've done a great job.

I'm sorry, can I take your work for translation on the Ficbook website?