Nasty things, those snorkacks. This is really good!

Lovely.

AHHAHHAHHAHHAHAHAHH LAUGHTER

Resilient indeed. Goid story.

That 'wand' should be put in a museum.

This is great — I love the creativity!

That last line is so Luna that it makes me smile.

Excellent work!

Garrick Ollivander is clever.

This is really good! I love your creativity!

Oh dear. That last line was utterly hilarious! I love it!

Loved it! These are two of the least-lauded and most-easily-expanded characters in the series. Excellent work!

I was re-reading this and I thought I'd come up with a more detailed review.

Ollivander and Luna do struck me as two people likely to be friends, given the fact that they're both eccentric, a bit other-worldly and odd, yet very clever and very kind (I think I've read somewhere that Ollivander is a Ravenclaw like Luna, though I cannot be sure). Voldemort's Second War must've been a difficult time, albeir fascinating to write about and to analyse. The books mainly show us the tale of Harry versus Voldemort, but I can't help but be fascinated by these minor characters. You really did bring Ollivander and Luna to life in this one-shot, and the bits about wandlore were spot-on and look very much like something Rowling might write.

I have ''left'' my FanFiction account now due to cyber-bullying, and therefore my stories have been removed. I am sorry about that. However, I'll probably continue to read your stories because I quite like your writing style. :-)

The most charming story ever told about being imprisoned in a dungeon. Well done.

Loved this!