Reviews for Fatal Absolution
saintfudge chapter 10 . 12/9/2013
Great quick read the only thing I didn't like was it was too short and I want more have fun
chartwilightmom chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
i would like a bit more, closure on everything around bella, but good that something happy came in the end, even if edward is an ass and deserves his butt kicked by bella for not stepping up sooner

keep your work coming!
chartwilightmom chapter 9 . 12/8/2013
damn, edward is too lucky, seriously, and jake, what a fucking dick!
chartwilightmom chapter 8 . 12/8/2013
hell yeah! need that epov, sick mind and all
so sad, all around, poor bella, like she is expecting death any moment, living life for that last breath
and edward could be the one to give her the death blow
chartwilightmom chapter 7 . 12/8/2013
still not caring for this edward, he has a long long road in my book
poor bella, she is so confused, can she trust anyone at this point? even family? i think not
chartwilightmom chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
damn, just intense
chartwilightmom chapter 5 . 12/8/2013
he is still an ass, lots to make up for if he is to redeem himself, not looking good at the moment, not looking good
chartwilightmom chapter 4 . 12/8/2013
oh bella, i feel so bad for her, not liking any of the cullen boys, not at all in this fic
chartwilightmom chapter 3 . 12/8/2013
yeah, it just did
chartwilightmom chapter 2 . 12/8/2013
dun dun dun!
chartwilightmom chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
oh my, such a darkella
bonz245 chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
Very good story..thanks.
Rebadams7 chapter 10 . 12/8/2013
Over the river ( of blood)
And thru the woods ( of hit men)
To who's house shall they go
What a ride
LPsDarkAngel chapter 10 . 12/7/2013
Well I hate when a story ends, but it was really good, I enjoyed it very much, though you could always write more lol
Guest chapter 10 . 12/5/2013
Yes, I'd like an EPOV, maybe in the form of a future-take. I'd like to know how Bella's healed, but perhaps her killing days are over. How she copes once she's finally under Esme's (a mother's) wing? I was hoping she would call him, but in her haze, I thought she didn't manage to place any call. It was nice to get his perspective of the fight, I went back to reread chapter 9 to imagine a more complete picture. He must have been on his way already, what he must have been thinking as he ran to her aid? Carlisle was ruthless with his hold on her person, then again it's expected with underlings in his line of work. The last two lines were perfect, something tells me she wasn't the only one abstaining.
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