A shame the story seems to have been abandoned at this point, though I'm not a big fan of the more recent plot directions and the addition of outbreak, it's just painful to have things end on such a cliffhanger.

Very interesting, good read! You writing definitely improved over time, especially early on conversations felt wooden (like a list of points to get across), but in later chapters it flowed naturally. I felt you did the cross-over with Warframe very well too, didn't overload us with references but still had a marked influence on the plot. Very interested to see where this fic is heading. Thanks for writing!

I fucking hate taylor in canon and now I hate taylor even more in your story. God,whoever thought making an insecure angst driven little bitch a protagonist has some serious fucking masochist isues. Blah blah blah, grim dark world, at least make her a little more warframey, the fact she hasn't exploded yet is complete bullshit.

Other than that good writing.

How could you just let it end there. You have to continue. I need answers desperately.

I have to say overall the story is amazing. It keeps reeling me in chapter after chapter. I love how Taylor has grow as an individual and as a cape. I cant wait to see how she'll act in the Warframe verse now that you have dropped her there.

Thank you for a wonderful story thus far please update it soon.

Sincerely,

Your Fan

7Winds ;)

So Armsmaster's Sherlock Holmes quote at the end of this chapter has no bearing. It's not actually impossible for 8 people to have similar powers, just improbable. So the quote doesn't actually support his point. In fact the quote is counter to his point. I don't disagree with his point, it is highly improbable that 8 unrelated people would have very similar powers, however it's not impossible.

Hey are you continuing at some point.

Interesting story and amazing chapter!

Tfw you're in an open group in Warframe and end up on the same team as one or more experienced players.

Vista: Do like mmmmmmm-bananas?
PRT Officer: Uhm, no?
Vista: Well you won't find any bananas on the MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON.

Yo to anyone checking the reviews other than the author their are more chapters of this story posted on sufficient velocity. Too the author; dude, what the hell? This is the second time since I found this story that I've thought it died only to find out that your just only updating it on a different website. I get that making edits in multiple threads is a pain in the ass, or maybe you got time constrictions or whatever but at least let your readers know that you and your story aren't dead man. For a story this good people will follow it.

I'm going to draw the Hookwolf power mower...

We need answers! Seriously why is there no more chapters here? I can see there is quite a lot of them on spacebattles forum...

Shit I wrote that previous one before finishing the chapter and in such a frenzy I almost forgot to log in. For I have not ''possibly'' stumbled upon another Bouse. I most definitely have XD.

Dem catchphrases ey?

Funny how such a small and silly things can brighten one's day.

''Hey Jeff.''

''Yes Adam?''

(Internal screaming)
Have I stumbled upon a fellow Bouse/tte?
Even if not, that brought a smile to my face when I read it in my two favourite casters' voices.