Reviews for Heritage
cyiusblack chapter 20 . 9h
update soon
shunshu chapter 20 . 6/25
hola! me encanto muy bueno el capitulo espero que lo actualicen pronto besos
Mr Popo chapter 20 . 6/23
First and foremost I'm glad you are doing well and second this story is awesome
Jago chapter 20 . 6/23
Welcome back
AmethystPone chapter 20 . 6/23
It's a bit hard for any good projectiles weapons to even be considered for developments when the projectiles themselves can be outrunned by any decent ninjas (Higher than Green Genin obviously)...
Six-Path Kyuubi Naruto was dodging light-speed attack and shiz during the battle against Madara if you want a reference...
Any true One-Man-Army characters in 'Naruto' like Obito, Madara, Naruto, and even Sasuke could solo the US Military and tank nukes to the face and not flinching (Naruto actually tanked 2 moon-cutting beams in his Kyuubi Cloak and then get up to One Punch the guy who did the moon-cutting without a scratch, after a lengthy exchanges of Jutsu while flying all over the moon)...
AmethystPone chapter 19 . 6/23
Course of Action, not Cause of Action.
AmethystPone chapter 18 . 6/23
Outclassed, not declassed.
AmethystPone chapter 8 . 6/23
Heh...
Dream on Ministry and Albus...

[RANT WARNING]
For one. Konoha loves its Bloodlines and Shinobi Clans.
For two. Any decent shinobi and kunoichi that know what they are doing can defeat most of the Wizard/Witch based on the fact that they are ninja, and that they don't need to fight fair alone, much less when frontal confrontation proved unwise. Competent Chunins and above can switch tactics mid-fight if their previous ones proved ineffective, or simply retreat to fight another day when they have more info.
For three. Ninja have massively/greatly superior physical capabilities and the ability to easily transverse many surfaces of many orientations with some training. Their strength, their endurance, their speed, their agility, their reflex & reaction time all on a high level. The first 'Valley of The End' fight between Sasuke and Naruto in canon was said to have been at super sonic level the beginning, with Sasuke and Naruto throwing, and pile-driving, and punching each other into rocks and concrete, and they get up and continue the fight almost like they are unaffected.
Fourth. They don't use wands, so they can't be "disarmed" (Unable to use Ninjutsu) and rendered helpless that way.
Fifth. Ninja techniques are a lot more battle-oriented than Wizarding Technique.
Sixth. They are freaking ninja, they don't have to fight fair.
Seventh. They have a standing military. A standing military of super soldiers.
Eight. They fight with tactics and overral strategies.
Ninth and finally, They are ninja, they don't fight fair if they don't want to.
[RANT OVER]
AmethystPone chapter 11 . 6/23
Awww...I wanted to see at least the cameo of Sexy Jutsu and its variants...That Jutsu is Legendary in effecting even a goddess...
AmethystPone chapter 9 . 6/23
The Kill me Color...

What's the point of looking like Ninja if the purpose of a Ninja is to NOT stand out and LOOK like a Ninja in the first place?
Furthermore, any halfway decent ninja wouldn't be affected by the coloring all that much both in detecting and concealing with said color. Do remember that he managed to paint the Hokage monument in broad daylight of a ninja village and no one noticed until it's already done, and actually outrun chunins in his bright orange kill me outfit. That points to being good enough at stealth and trap-making that he could afford the orange outfit.
Then there are also all the flashy Jutsus that make his outfits look dim by comparision.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21
I like the cross over idea, and you leave enough background to make sense without straying into overkill.
wildtrance chapter 20 . 6/22
Nice. Base is set up, and everyone is poised for action.
Let's see how this goes.
Tomon chapter 20 . 6/22
I really liked this chapter, it's nice to see how a strong team can affect such mission. Looking forward to seeing if Zabuza will be able to come up with something :)
Good job.
Jewlbunny chapter 20 . 6/22
It's good. I like it so far. As always, hope to read more soon.
mooneysfate chapter 20 . 6/22
i loved chapter 20. i reread the whole story before reading it. i really, really love this story. i'm so sorry you had cancer and have rehab to recuperate but am thankful for the update as this is one of my favorite stories. :)
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