ay yoooo I agree w my guest homie below me

yo, the first line is so sus. You need to add context.

One of the best fanfictions ever

Well, that was a very good yet emotional story, I love the good authors like you

noooo!

noooooo!

aww

*cries*

This is the BEST fanfic I've ever read! AMAZING and so damn satisfying :)

I just wanna say that HOLY SHIT I have not had this good of a read In a long ass time 10/10 would read again

okay i just want to start with you are an amazing writer, i kept thinking i knew where it was going and didn’t understand how there was so much left in the story but you constantly threw things in that surprised me, i got about halfway through and then got really busy so had to take a break from reading, when i came back to this story i was worried i was going to have lost some interest but it instantly re caught my attention and i was constantly trying to read it to find out what happened next, let’s just say i took a lot of long “bathroom breaks” at work to sneak off and read another chapter. overall amazing story

Jeez it’s been a while since I’ve felt that on edge reading a story. Great work.

so i haven’t read this story yet but the prologue seems very interesting, i will probably leave another review after i finish it but i just wanted to say i think it’s awesome that you put a bible verse at the end of every chapter, it makes the reader think about God in a time when they weren’t before and i saw some people were mad that you were doing this but i think it’s very brave to stand for what you believe in, i hope even through whatever hate you get for doing it you keep doing it because in reality it has no affect on your story and if people are so angry and twisted on the inside that they get mad at you for writing this at the end of your chapters it probably a good thing that they are seeing it.

money can't solve all problems percy

that first sentence caught me so off guard