|Reviews for Twisted Fate|
| ToddGilliss chapter 29 . 6/18
Minerva is in Italy
| dreamjanus chapter 21 . 6/16
1/2 Phoenix, 1/2 Basilisk and 1/2 Shadow Wolf is mathematically impossible as it would make a 1 & 1/2 creature/person.
1/3 of each or even equal portions of each would correct.
| torchbearer chapter 9 . 5/30
Thanks about the info on Ash, i was curious about him.
| RiddleMeBlack chapter 2 . 5/11
There are so many plot holes in the first two chapters alone. The idea is wonderful but the story needs some work.
| jdboss1 chapter 8 . 5/9
that Was Good in till harry did that to Hermione
Cant belive he did it
| Crypt chapter 31 . 2/21
I enjoyed this story for the most part. However there were quite a few inconsistencies, and the timeline got very confusing at the earlier half of the story.
I hope you revisit this story in the future to iron out some of the issues.
Anyway, thanks for sharing.
| Jamervan chapter 13 . 2/9
If Snape was kissed how is he there?
| ThunderSphinx chapter 31 . 1/11
You ended it way too soon. We never got to see Daphne gtg turned into a vampire. What kind of powers will she have? What will get Element be? :((
| ThunderSphinx chapter 21 . 1/11
So Emily is trapped as a vampire forever in the body of a 6 year-old? O.o
So how exactly will she become Harry's lover? How does that work, lol? I hope her body grows lolz.
| Svenion chapter 26 . 12/31/2017
Why didn’t he keep riddle’s magic?
| Svenion chapter 13 . 12/31/2017
Ummmm, didn’t a dementor Kiss Snape when he was at Azkaban with AD and MM? Cuz he’s in this chapter
| Svenion chapter 2 . 12/31/2017
Ummm, why would Harry need the goblins to remove the horcrux when you stated earlier that it had already disappeared when Harry was turned?
| Orion Sherwind chapter 26 . 11/6/2017
Gellert grindelwald killed innocent people and used a boy for his desires haven't you seen fantastic beast and where to find them
There are no limits to which you can sink are there!
| Fumbls chapter 3 . 10/26/2017
Its just a little too much. Pretty much threw all pre-established rules about the world out the window. Probably the edgiest story ive ever read. Not terrible, just not my cup o tea
| TooLazyToLogIn chapter 13 . 9/5/2017
didn't Severus get his soul sucked out by dementors?