Reviews for Friendly Advice
Aronim chapter 1 . 1/2
Well done.

One little thing: Your formatting is a little weird. I recommend keeping actions and speech to a single person in each paragraph. So change paragraph when you show how someone reacts to something someone speaks. It is a little confusing at times the way you write it.
Yellow Green Fish chapter 7 . 1/1
Aw dang where's the double date? But still, awesome story! Loved it! Keep up the good work!
mckydstarlight chapter 7 . 12/13/2015
But there is no next chapter! there has to be at chapter!
kyleeadams123 chapter 7 . 10/14/2015
This is awesome! Some of the things you come up with astound me. Great job can't at for more.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2015
Cool story, i like it!
Toaofwriting chapter 7 . 3/9/2015
I love this story; great job! :)
TheFrozenLadybug chapter 7 . 12/3/2014
I love this story! Please continue! :)
my1alias chapter 7 . 12/1/2014
Yay double date! I'm looking forward to it!
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 7 . 11/30/2014
Aw, so sweet! Great job!
noitffb chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
You posted another chapter?! Awesome thank you very much I love it! :):):):)
Lt. Basil chapter 7 . 11/29/2014
Ooooh, I cannot WAIT to see this! :) :) :) A double date with these two couples? That sounds like a recipe for... maybe not disaster, but definitely complications.
I love the way that Rapunzel so easily slips into 'comforting big sister' mode at the beginning there. Gotta love that girl...
Hey, I have an idea - what about doing a chapter later on where Kristoff is freaking out over wedding preparations and Eugene helps him feel better by telling him about what happened at his and Rapunzel's wedding? A reaction shot from Kristoff after that would be hilarious...
Keep up the good work! Update soon!
dreamer 3097 chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
This is good
noitffb chapter 6 . 11/9/2014
Awesome! I hope there's a sequel! :):)
WickedWitchoftheSE chapter 6 . 10/25/2014
Aw, love these little snippets! Great job!
Krankedupcoffeefan chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
More! More! More! More! More ! More! Can't get enough of this story.
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