Reviews for He Came Along |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Holaaa. Muchas gracias por está maravillosa historia, me atrapó toda la trama y me gustó mucho como los personajes fueron creciendo. Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador. Adriu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually i love this story. This is the way society was back then. It is not boring to me. I expect the horrible man to show up at the ranch when she is alone. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the 3rd or 4 th reread for me. I love this story. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, awesome. thank you. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bravery is facing your problems and not avoiding or running from them. If I was asked what I hate the most in fanfiction stories it’s the running that Edward and Bella are always doing. In this story it seems to be Bella’s specialty. She has quite a bit of growing up to do, throws a tantrum and runs or sneaks out and runs. Frustrated with her character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It sounds like Edward has spoken to Jasper about his feelings. I hope he doesn’t make this more difficult than it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel bad that I forgot all about Charlie. I’m glad Edward brought Bella to make her peace. I think Edward needs to get his head out of his ass and ask the Whitlock’s if Bella could stay with them while he courts her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, men are stupid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of like delayed shock. Her dreams are weird, she ad libs a lot. We know she wasn’t caught and accosted by the criminals, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is Edward attracted to Bella and looking at her as a potential wife? Maybe he thinks proposing marriage off the bat is a bit much and or he is hoping to get to know her to see if they are compatible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that was a dream. If it wasn’t than Dr. Cullen is a cad. |