Holaaa.
Muchas gracias por está maravillosa historia, me atrapó toda la trama y me gustó mucho como los personajes fueron creciendo.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
Adriu

Actually i love this story. This is the way society was back then. It is not boring to me. I expect the horrible man to show up at the ranch when she is alone.

This is the 3rd or 4 th reread for me. I love this story.

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Great story, awesome. thank you.

Nice

Bravery is facing your problems and not avoiding or running from them. If I was asked what I hate the most in fanfiction stories it’s the running that Edward and Bella are always doing. In this story it seems to be Bella’s specialty. She has quite a bit of growing up to do, throws a tantrum and runs or sneaks out and runs. Frustrated with her character.

It sounds like Edward has spoken to Jasper about his feelings. I hope he doesn’t make this more difficult than it is.

I feel bad that I forgot all about Charlie. I’m glad Edward brought Bella to make her peace. I think Edward needs to get his head out of his ass and ask the Whitlock’s if Bella could stay with them while he courts her.

God, men are stupid.

Kind of like delayed shock. Her dreams are weird, she ad libs a lot. We know she wasn’t caught and accosted by the criminals, right?

Is Edward attracted to Bella and looking at her as a potential wife? Maybe he thinks proposing marriage off the bat is a bit much and or he is hoping to get to know her to see if they are compatible.

I hope that was a dream. If it wasn’t than Dr. Cullen is a cad.