She shacks up with another man and he's still pining after her? Even marry's the tramp, What a looser.

I love the concept of Sirius being in love with lily also, but loving her and James enough to let them be happy together.

Eww.

I literally cried three times during this story. It is very beautiful.

You lovely lovely man.

Hmm, never really been a fan of those fics where the FMC can ‘do no wrong’ despite definitely doing something wrong. Striking Harry for being heartbroken over her shacking up with another man and leaving alone because he couldn’t bare to see it anymore... yep, it was so wrong of him to feel that way.

Beautifully written. Possibly the best one-off fan fiction I've ever read, and possibly the most satisfyingly ending.

I know you say this has no bashing but damn i wish you did, i cant believe the weasley and hermione is like that to harry, they're all traitorious bunch that need to be weeded down. Too bad you only reduce them by two i would expect... Say one of harry lightning from battle of hogwarts hit all of the weasley killing them all

This was great. Thanks.

Corny and predictable

This was so fucking corny! Ugh!

So beautiful..

Last Pat's funny

It's so sad, but happy at the same time too

Aww. This was a cute one. Nicely done