Reviews for The Pact
Chigrl78 chapter 25 . 12/1
So they managed to save/store some of Ana eggs or did surrogate donate her eggs instead?
cfigueroa78 chapter 10 . 10/21
I like the twist in this story - the change of characters. Ethan is Ana's best friend, Kate was just one of Christian's subs, and even Ana and Christian's backgrounds are different. It's refreshing to see a different dynamic - it does get boring reading other stories that sound like reading the books. The thing that irks me about Christian is who his anger is directed towards - Elena. I understand he was young but is he able to see that he allowed a woman that spurned him to win? Blonde subs and no relationships because of her? It was more understanding when he had a fixation on subs that resembled his neglectful mother. But is Elena's rejection all worth this to him? If so, he must have loved her more than he thought.
nadamos chapter 9 . 10/21
One of my all time favourite FSoG FF, I always reread it.
cfigueroa78 chapter 7 . 10/21
Their interaction is so great and hysterical! I love when she said, "cup of pussy coffee for the boss".
Renee chapter 10 . 8/16
I have been reading Fifty Shades FanFic for a while now, and I think you're a really good writer. I am wiping the tears from my face as I'm writing this. This chapter really moved me. I will definitely read more of your stories. Keep up the good work!
fiftyshadeslover15 chapter 8 . 8/13
this is hilarious
Abbybaby1 chapter 10 . 7/28
Good job love it
Abbybaby1 chapter 5 . 7/27
I give this chapter a 5 star, I love how you didn't make them fall into each other's arms right away.
Twinder chapter 29 . 7/17
Truly amazing story
Thank You
Ipscott chapter 14 . 6/18
sorry that people get so upset over others work. If they want a story to go a certain way, they should write their own or not read fan fiction at all. I don't usually read A/N because I like to be surprised at the chapter but I happen to see this one about the upset guest reader and it makes me angry that they are allowed to attack like this. I have read bad stories and even quit some but I will never belittle the writer. Others may like them and that is okay.
Ipscott chapter 9 . 6/18
Loving this story. So far it is so funny and cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/9
I'm hooked after Chapter 1. Very original storyline. Love it!
jkr22 chapter 29 . 3/29
Great story - thank you for sharing!
Guest chapter 29 . 2/1
I think you should change the names and certain situations in this story and Get Published...
Just like E L James...
You are an incredible writer...
Great ideas... Too perfect...
Love u ))
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31
o love
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