Reviews for The Grand Hotel
jk chapter 1 . 2/10
Ummm bell as gonna raise Tanya's kid...fuck that! Bella should marry Jake! I mean seriously, he stuck his dick in Tanya! You don't want that shit inside you bella!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
So, he married and had a child with a different woman. Who he claims to have loved. But now that bella's back she's the love of his life. It might be me but I think shouldn't take him back that quickly, She should have picked jake who was with her for a long time and picked her above all else. I hate main characters who get hung up on men that don't really deserve them. That shit happens in real life so bleh
sueIZide chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Cute.
Watermelon babe chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
Sweet and gummy..thanks for sharing! E-beth is the sweetest girl ever!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
So Edward married a Tanya a woman who was just okay, and had a kid wit her, because he was too weak to stand up to his father?! Wow. He was married happily for years, so why is it Bella couldn't get married to Jake and have a kid as well?

I totally hate the double standard.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
this was nice
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2014
I don't really like this type of stories. The guy chose another woman, married her, had a baby with her, and she wants him insted of a man who was with her for 5 years, was faithful to her and chose her above any other female? Seriously? For me a man who chose another woman for a mother of his children doesn't deserve such a devotion. But whatever. I've seen planty of women in real life who are like this Bella so it's believable. Just because I find her pathetic doesn't mean it's unrealsitic. Good writing.
bellibella chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
So he had Tanya and now that bella is good enough for him he has Bella
And they are going to get married in the same place he did with Tanya...
N coment
NeeNee246 chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
This is awesome! :)
Angelik Angel chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
I love your beautiful story.
Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a prosperous New Year.
See you next year if you do not write more this year. xo
honeyimhom chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
I enjoyed the story.
roon0 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
This was so sweet. Lovely stuff.
Moltz chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Merry Christmas to you and yours!
Thank you for sharing this happy little story.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
best ever...
pamaroo chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
Cute!
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