Reviews for Under the Water
Crystal-Wolf-Guardain-967 chapter 24 . 8/31/2015
I loved it! keep up the good work!
Dancing-Souls chapter 23 . 10/3/2014
awe yay so happy for their peaceful moments before things go back to getting crazy!
Dancing-Souls chapter 22 . 10/3/2014
Awe her brother and sister are awesome!
Dancing-Souls chapter 20 . 10/3/2014
Cool she talked to the dead tributes...that is a very interesting twist :O
Dancing-Souls chapter 19 . 10/3/2014
wow awesome she awoke! Poor Finnick...the struggle is hard.
Dancing-Souls chapter 17 . 10/3/2014
Ah dang take some time to grieve, but then cheer up a little. Go slow. :)
Dancing-Souls chapter 16 . 10/3/2014
wow so dang cool!
Dancing-Souls chapter 11 . 10/3/2014
awe such a touching scene in the midst of all the sadness :)
Dancing-Souls chapter 7 . 10/3/2014
Wow just wow Avra's pain :O
I guess I really connected with it this chapter.
Dancing-Souls chapter 6 . 10/3/2014
Dang their scenes together are the best, Finnick and Avra. I really do like Avra's alliance with Alt though as well it comes in at a close second! I like Alt he is an awesome character darn why do awesome people have to die? :(
Dancing-Souls chapter 4 . 10/3/2014
Awe this chapter was just too awesome! You should consider lending your skills out! I would rent it for a day or two. lol Besides that I just loved the vulnerable moment Avra and Finnick had! :3
Dancing-Souls chapter 2 . 10/3/2014
Haha oh my gosh to know why she was watching Mags is hilarious I love your writing style even though you said it was hard to write a guy that isn't your own OC. :) Great job with Finnicks point of view. I really enjoyed it.
Dancing-Souls chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
wow a great start! I like her story already! :D
Katniss chapter 24 . 9/1/2014
OMFG i love this! It made me laugh and had me nearly on the verge of tears at some points u r so amazing its unreal xxxx
LunaLupus16 chapter 19 . 4/17/2014
This is constructive critisim. I know you finished the story but i wanted you to know that in the first sentence of this chapter, you spelled " finner",not "dinner".

I actually laughed though; the worf is like finnick and dinner mashed together.
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