I’m only 8 chapters in and I’m so confused on your take of this story. I guess I kinda understand why he didn’t punish kushina too much after showing her what she went through. How the hell are you going to add an OC to counter the MC you made? (Dumbest thing authors do) “I want to be seen as human” yet you make him such an asshole who is always “I need to get back to how I was, I’m too soft” you are giving me mixed signals on a damn fan fiction and I hate it

Ah so Kami's voice was definitely based off Kyoka Suigetsu. I figured it might've been but Sakura being a literal zanpakuto just confirms it for me

Since Kakashi is teaching team 8 on this, it'd be pretty interesting to see Hinata with the chidori. She won't have tunnel vision with Byakugan, she's a cqc specialist, and she has a lightning/fire chakra nature in canon, it's perfect for her. Well assuming Kakashi bothers to teach his students in this fic

That Kami's voice genjutsu is super op, basically just a beefed up Kyoka Suigetsu. It's even more useful than tsukuyomi since it doesn't need a sharingan and can work on many people or an area

I wonder if that turning into smoke technique will be explained in one of these anbu flashbacks. Maybe it's some sort of technique from the stage 3 lightning he has, idk but ig I'll see

‘A story about Naruto being “cursed” and finally getting rid of it ‘ (adds an oc for plot convenience) haven’t read this one before

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Why is this so fucking trash, he told her not to hate her mom? Motherfucker was the one that was causing him pain wtf, i best this author wants to get NTR and then tells his girl it’s okay if she enjoys it fucking trash ass story. See a therapist or get some bitches ️

Curse? It’s a ducking it how it is no need to be so fucking dramatic

I read up to chapter 7 needs lemons sooner if there are any, needs hidden leaf bashing, remove Kushina bashing/ evil Kushina & instead rewrite the story to make it were Kushina is good & make Minato bad, etc..

I know it is unlikely, considering it has been 5 years, but I hope you decide to come back to this eventually

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There’s “making him out to be the bad guy” and then there’s “making him an asshole to everyone who likes him remotely for some illogical reason even after learning a ton of things”. It’s like every step he takes forward, you yeet him back. And it’s not subtle and there isn’t character development. He literally went from being super chill and slightly cocky one chapter in the beginning to a fucking douche the next.

Why the fuck did you stop. Fucking serious bro