Reviews for Fire at Will
Charliejnr chapter 1 . 8/21/2018
Not a bad story, except for the fact that the CIA isn't allowed to operate on American soil
Yuenne chapter 19 . 6/12/2018
Wow , if you think about it..the CIA are more of a criminal organization then Olympus. Your not supposed to shoot/kill them , that's very much illegal and kinda the only thing CIA does
WiseGirl1609 chapter 17 . 3/28/2018
LUKE IS PRETENDING TO BE HARRISON ISNT HE OH NO
WizardDemigodGeek chapter 14 . 11/2/2017
HOW COULD U KILL NICO. I KNOW YOU WILL NEVER SEE THIS CAUSE IT WAS LONG AGO BUT AHDJKSNDNXJS
JC RH chapter 21 . 8/22/2017
It sucks that well written and carefully built stories like this have lesser reviews than stupid saop opera style stories. It was really good. The action scenes were written well and you built characters brilliantly. Specially Nico's character and what happened to him was really well written.
Fasty chapter 3 . 8/7/2017
i immediately thought of the devil is a part timer anime at the cafe part
Abe Gill chapter 1 . 7/28/2017
The fight was kinda like Mr and Mrs. Smith
GirlishlyGreek chapter 7 . 4/16/2017
YES YES YESS OMGS YESSSS! THIS IS AMAZING! FINALLY OMGS XDD
GirlishlyGreek chapter 6 . 4/16/2017
Omgs, I love a tipsy Annabeth XD
GirlishlyGreek chapter 5 . 4/16/2017
Yesss! The feeeelllssss XD
GirlishlyGreek chapter 1 . 4/16/2017
Oh my gods, this story is amazing!
drogorath chapter 15 . 3/14/2017
I really think this as realistic a fic can get .I really love the buildup to the story but Id like to point out a few things which confused me. Wouldn't it be the FBI who catches criminal's in the US? Don't the CIA have a military team to do their bidding? And wouldn't there be indoctrination in trainees to prevent them from ever defecting over as in the armed forces ? I'm not American so I'd like to know
SeaSpree chapter 20 . 3/5/2017
This was amazing! The writing flow was very natural, and very in-character. Some tid-bits were a tad fast, but nothing unbelievable. Simply put, this was extremely well-written, and I can't wait to head over and check out the sequel!
onStyle20 chapter 6 . 12/1/2016
mo
Guest chapter 20 . 3/11/2016
Love love it even though a little occ but anyways loved it
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