Reviews for Calling To the Heart
jeoliverio chapter 114 . 8/25
Great story about Prophecies and betrayal!
kushka chapter 114 . 6/5
Amazing story
Cramos28 chapter 114 . 5/20
This story gave me life! I have read most of your stories and this by far is my favorite! I may even read it again! I'm not sure any of your stories can top this one for me... I will continue reading until I read them all but I'm absolutely in love with this story! Great job!
Guest chapter 114 . 3/22
Awesome story ty so much for such a wonderful reading experience. Much thanks
B4bidden.Products chapter 114 . 3/13
absolutely love this story thank you
cela chapter 113 . 2/14
charlie was having a beer?
Kochabilka chapter 36 . 2/1
The last 3 paragraphs to this chapter was a Kleenex moment ;-)
PurplePhoenix89 chapter 114 . 12/10/2015
wow I LOVE your story! I have spent the last 11 hrs reading it, non stop! I just couldn't put it down!
HarolxdsWifeyxD chapter 102 . 8/18/2015
Lol Good Luck Charlie.
HarolxdsWifeyxD chapter 90 . 8/17/2015
They Should Tell Her Bitch Is A Bad Word...
Guest chapter 102 . 5/23/2015
I love Peter. He's a a trip
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 5/3/2015
Awesome start
faletoimj chapter 114 . 3/11/2015
Great story...
adara1103 chapter 114 . 2/5/2015
I have found that I absolutely love all of the stories that you write. I think you have an amazing gift. Can't wait to read more from you.
ladygoddess8 chapter 114 . 1/20/2015
I must say this is a much preferred version of Bella getting pregnant than the original novels. I always disliked that Bella got pregnant in the original because it, to me, signified the loss of her importance as a character and her growth. Throughout the books, Bella was shown as this exceptional human who was brought into the supernatural world. Someone who was meant to be a part of that world and her experiences were guiding her to that point. With the birth of her child, Bella's transformation into her proper place was overshadowed by her daughter who until this book had no real standing or importance. I felt no real attachment to Renesmee in the story and she felt like she was put in as only a way to appease Jake making his love for Bella seem unimportant and trivial. Bella as a vampire should of became and equal to Edward who could stand for herself without his backing well still being his mate. It felt wrong how the story went.

In this fanfiction however, I felt differently. I was definitely nervous about Bella becoming pregnant because a lot of stories have been ruined for me by this but found this story to actually benefit from Bella having a child than not. I came to care for Grace because her presence had an importance and she was not killing off Bella for it. You allowed Bella to have her strength without taking away the strain of having a child so quickly (though I believe that Bella was pregnant a lot longer than anyone can know and like some just not really physically showing until later into the pregnancy). I got to know Grace and her significance well still being able to follow along with Bella and Jasper's importance as well. I was expecting the pregnancy to occur because the foreshadowing and was not blindsided by the sudden impregnation of Bella when nothing pointed to the fact it was possible. You guided the reader to the possibility and that helped a lot.

Sorry for the small speech. I sometimes feel the urge to tell my opinion and hope to hear others in return. I sometimes get carried away and hope I did not offend in anyway. I enjoyed reading this fic and will browse your other stories.
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