A orphanage for child stories ready to be adopted and allowed to grow... Very interesting.

I would like you to continue this wonderful story if you get the time to do so.

Please continue fallen hero

This is another story on my maybe adoption list!

I hope Harry will turn the tables on Morgana and have her wrapped around his finger instead!

This is a very intriguing premise. I'll be sure to keep it in mind for adoption!

So, why doesn't Karasuba just assassinate Issei using her insane speed or when they're no witnesses? I wholeheartedly agree with not stupidly giving Devils access to any SGs. Yet despite that, you, another author, once again gives Devils everything they want.

I can't wait for Harry's fourth faction to make their grand entrance to the Supernatural World.

Venelana made the wrong choice and I hope House Gremory falls into ruin.

Grayfia rightfully deserves to be called the humiliating title of Whore Queen. For me, her getting together with the disgusting Sirzechs isn't the issue; rather, it's she had done so while still in a relationship with Harry. If she wanted to end the relationship, she should've at least had the decency to do so upfront. That said, I hope Millicas dies from some terminal disease, because I wish for there to be zero biological trace of evidence of Grayfia and Sirzechs' union.

When Irisviel was introduced in the previous chapter, I originally thought it was Akitsu from Sekirei from her description and circumstance.

Harry and Iris' daughter, Illyasviel, is a cutie pie and must be protected at all costs!

isnt harry the head of the kendo club? thus it his duty to ensure their safety in all forms? so why would the need to pay him?

how did sirius die if harry wasnt in britian thus sirius shouldnt of been ether? since the reason he died in canon was harry been tricked into goign to the DOM ,also wasnt harry been a bit of a hpyocrite with the whole keeping secrets thing with akeno..since they were pretty much doing it for the same reasons

I’d honestly have made the Peverell’s one of the Extra Demon families, rather than having them be one of the 72 Pillars, since the 72 Pillars are all named as of the current point in time.

Your weebish tendencies are glaring through with making the sword a fucking katana. Why the actual fuck would it be a katana? Christianity had literally no presence in the orients over a hundred years ago much less 800 years. Hell the katana was just being thought of in that era if I remember right.

I understand being a fan of something and wanting to work it into your story, but don't do it to the detriment of your story.

This is actually pretty interesting but the fact you are using an OC for the "main" girl is dreadful. There is an abundance of women in DxD, there's very little reason to make one up.

Nope. So Imperius can attack and get away with it fuck off.

Who adopted this because I would want you to continue this amazing story. CHAPTER 3-5.

This one is amazing