Reviews for Before He Cheats
Reviewer chapter 3 . 1/29
Yeah... You shouldnt event wrote this if you dont know how to end it properly. Geez...
XD1411 chapter 1 . 1/4
Sasuke smiled and lightly stroked the golden. His golden what? This sentence was left unfinished. Also, the (...) acts the same way as the (. !) and (?).
IchigoPudding chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
Too cute x
IchigoPudding chapter 2 . 12/27/2014
Naru 3
IchigoPudding chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Aww Naru D:
NaokoKami chapter 3 . 10/16/2014
It was not a cheesy ending. I enjoyed reading it.-Thank you for your writing.
MusikMastr chapter 2 . 5/19/2014
Wow this is getting seriously good. I'm like feeling it your an amazing writer.
MusikMastr chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
Awesome I really like it :)
PerSonNee chapter 3 . 1/9/2014
Aww its cute! I like how you wrote this little fanfic! #realistic #awesome #loveit #sasunaru 3
Amaya the Wolf Goddess chapter 3 . 1/3/2014
I love this story. I find that many SasuNaru stories are fluffy and stupid but I like the direction you took it. this story is so good you don't need a sequal
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2013
Very well written!
rizeru-chan chapter 3 . 12/20/2013
THATS SO SAAAAAAAADDDDD
Kisecchi27 chapter 3 . 12/19/2013
luv it!
SoraNakhara chapter 3 . 12/19/2013
Ok that was a bit cheesy and simple. The flow of the story was off as well as the dialogue being weird. To me the story didn't fell at all real which is sad considering what you had thought of had real potential. Look in to a beta if you don't already have one, it will help in hashing out some of your more technical errors.
Rei chapter 3 . 12/16/2013
Friends sound good to me :) plus the ItaDei :D love them! You should do a ItaDei story I definitely read that
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