Reviews for Offspring
AllenxEdward chapter 3 . 1/7
Poor Ren. I feel so bad for him.
gamerright11 chapter 2 . 1/1
Love it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
Can't wait to read more!
ms. cheerful chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
Awww Uncle Ed! Thats adorable! Thats so sad how Ren senses their discomfort. He's pretty smart, too. Yikes, Ed is blaming Ren?! He shouldnt do that-and he shouldnt blame himself, either. BLAME TUCKER! :D Nice chapter, cant wait for more!
ms. cheerful chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
OK. FUERY IS OFFICIALLY MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY. AND REACTION, too. This is off to a great start! Whoa! Ren does fire alchemy...without a circle?! whoa whoa whoa! Im curious to find out more about little Ren! (Creative name, too, how you added the roy and ed in it.) :D
AllenxEdward chapter 2 . 12/13/2013
I loved it. I am about to cry.
AllenxEdward chapter 1 . 12/13/2013
Excitement! I want to read more.