Reviews for Undecided
Twin68 chapter 41 . 9/24
This has been one of my favorit stories I hate to see this story almost be done I hope you write another Paul he is my favorit and a total bad ass
Guest chapter 41 . 9/24
I'm going to miss this story so much, is there a chance you will write another Paul / oc story?
Guest chapter 41 . 9/24
When you said there was something I wouldn't like I thought it was going to be something idioticic like Bella going back to Edward, come to find out it was just the lack of an unnecessary fight scene. It's all good ;)
FireIceandPoison chapter 41 . 9/25
a fight scene wasn't needed. this chapter was perfect.
FireIceandPoison chapter 40 . 9/25
well that was different... xD
Miami12 chapter 41 . 9/25
I absolutely love this story. It is so dam good. Paul certainly redeemed himself in the last chapter. These two are so good together . The sex scenes melt the pages! I am going to hate seeing this end but will be reading it many times. Thank you for all your time and energy on this story. Looking forward to the episode. :)
Lady of Sign chapter 41 . 9/24
whaaa! Im soo sad this story is over! I loved every single moment! but everything about this chapter was so good...the only thing I thought was that the interaction between the Cullens and the wolves was a bit abrupt but still good. *Sigh* Ok now I can go back and read it all at once! lol
notashamedtobe chapter 41 . 9/24
notashamedtobe chapter 40 . 9/24
Sexy hot damn
notashamedtobe chapter 39 . 9/24
That went rather smoothly
FireIceandPoison chapter 38 . 8/8

thats all i gotta say xD
Lindy Rose chapter 38 . 8/7
I love this story! It's one of the rare ones that the slow unfolding of it is so perfect because the scenes between Angela and Paul and the way you built up their love are so beautiful as nd intense that you fall into them. I can't wait to see the how it ends!
marissa chapter 38 . 7/19
im still quite upset with paul and with how he treated angela. and im also upset with her for just taking him back. he needs to grovel. and will you write another paul/oc story? ill pay you? please
Twin68 chapter 38 . 7/19
Oh sweet Jesus that was awesome I can't stop reading this chapter all the words Paul said and how he said them omg girl I wish I had my very own Paul you are so good please don't take so long next time and I'm glad Paul finally told her the truth and now I can't wait to see how you write ther up comings lives they will live in la push this is going to be a wonderful adventure to read
Khadejah1999 chapter 38 . 7/21
Yasss I love this story ! It's amazing , I've never read one like this before ! You should, do like a Bella Jacob one and make spin off or maybe even Kim or jaded or even Seth ! I think a Seth one would be cool
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